| Reviews for My Heart is Breaking But My Smile Stays On |
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Koums chapter 2 . 12/21/2017 Whoa! You just cliffied this and decided to walk away?! Like this is super intense and there hasn't been an update like in over a year? I...man I don't know what to say or how to feel, (I mean aside from feeling super bad for Kurt), those words really hurt. I don't even know how I would feel or handle that situation. Like a part of me is like Kurt should leave and let them figure out their own life because just from the two chapters, obviously the glue in that relationship. They may keep finding their way back to each other but they are clearly incapable of staying together, at least not without him. But then there is the part of me that knows what love and relationships are like and how its not always easy and running isn't always an option because it may hurt more to walk away then to stay and work it out. But DAMN those words hurt and they weren't even pointed at me. AND THEN you walked away, no update for over A YEAR. You left Kurt hurt in that bed with no resolution. Man that's cold... |
Sam chapter 2 . 6/4/2017 I really like how you depict their relationship. It's hard when people feel jealous or insecure. I hope you'll pick this again :) it would be interesting to see how their relationship would be like after Kurt starts feeling insecure. Would Kurt withdraw from them? I don't feel like he would tell them right away; instead he'd spend more time away or not cuddle with them as much. |
Skysong101 chapter 2 . 4/1/2017 I don't suppose you would consider writing a chapter where Kurt starts acting a little different since the arguement and Sebastian and Hunter realize that Kurt heard their arguement and that it hurt him badly and attempt to do something about it? |
Nijiyu chapter 2 . 1/5/2017 Reading the first chapter made me feel all fluffy and happy inside~ 3 But reading the second broke my heart into tiny pieces... You really should write a third one to heal that, okay? Polyamorous relationships are such a difficult thing to keep on going happily and your take on writing one is incredibly nice and realistic in sight of this particular pairing, so I'd really love to read more of them from you. Best wishes, Ni~ |
EveJHoang chapter 2 . 8/16/2016 I'd have packed my shit and left if I'd heard that! |
Junjou-Angel chapter 2 . 5/4/2016 I really hope to see another chapter for this where hunter and Sebastian find out that Kurt heard what they were talking about and talks about his insecurities! |
rooz33 chapter 2 . 5/2/2016 Oh jeez! I love this a lot! I'd love to see another chapter. This ending just makes me sad... These boys need to talk about what they mean to each other, pronto. I'm emotional! Good writing does that to me! Poor Kurt... Can you write something to fix this? Either Kurt confronting them or walking away for a while? My baby should always be happy and cherished, instead of a means to an end or replacable. I'd love it if Kurt being flirted with showed Hunter and Sebastian how they feel and then make Kurt feel like he's appreciated. Anyway, I love your writing style! Very pleasant to read. Thank you for writing this 3 |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/2/2016 Ugh, this hit me right in the feels! D': I loved it! |
BrittLiz24 chapter 2 . 5/2/2016 I'd like to know how or if Kurt deals with this, what would happen? Would Kurt leave? |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2016 Like the story, wish there was more. |
LegendaryBritinKinlor chapter 1 . 12/5/2013 Love it! This threesome is just so HOT! You did great writing Hunter. Hope you'll write more of these three. All that sexy needs to be out in the world! Well done! :) |
fanficfangirl13 chapter 1 . 12/2/2013 I definitely love Kunter and Kuntbastian. This was very sweet. :) Rock On |