You are BACK! Great to see an update from you! Another good read so thank you! Hope to see more soon!

Ooooh, I'm intrigued. That was fun. I had that little "Jareth's here" heart gasp at the line about his voice being wild like lightning & thunder. And I enjoyed the interaction, as always. I'm very curious why he's backing away from her & what a "sunwoman" is. And I liked the line about everything else being simply more boring, and the visual about the rumors, for different reasons. :) I hope you're inspired to continue! I've been pretty absent around here for a while, but do still check email, so it was exciting to see a name I know pop up in my author alerts.

Great little snapshots, so enjoyable, more please

Aw! It's nice to think this could be one of the many timelines within the the Past is Prologue. It's such a relief having a more kind Jareth. Especially after I just came out of reading a fanfic with dark Jareth hoowee! Also love that David Bowie song reference ;)

Um, okay, that was really cute. Damn look at Sarah go with that confession! Go girl!

Oh my goodness, it's like a blast from the 'what past is prologue'! The alternative timeline, the knowing of past, present and possibly future, the luminal state. The one of those who's got away. How quaintly bittersweet. I can't even find the words yet to comment on THAT magnificent tale, it has enthralled me so, time and again.
I also can't thank you enough for the pleasure your talant has brought me. I hope your muse will find its way back to the Labyrinth to weave another spell and wish you well in all your endeavors.

I love the line about "something grandiose just out of her reach". :)

You are obviously a gifted writer. You only have 98 stories to go...
While I do like the way you paint Jareth I also would like to see more mischievousness in him...he is, after all, the Goblin King.
The way you bring the scene to life, I feel like I am there witnessing it, is remarkable. You also are talented with internal dialogue, which is not easy. Please continue the other 98 stories so I can enjoy.

Good to see you a happy ending but just as good,thank you. :)

Ha! Aw, lovely. :) love the idea of Jareth the magician as a cover. And the timelines...really creative!Sarah being happy to live her life at the end there was kind of profound too... Love it x

Wow...that was one of the best one-shots I have ever read. the bredth of emotions evoked in such a short amount of time was just... wow. Thank you

Really well written as always one thing I hate about one shots is they always end to soon leaving me wanting more..
Look forward to more of your writing.

So beautiful. I love it!

*flails with happiness* :')

This was lovely :)