Nope. Too easily forgiven. Obviously Sherlock didn't need John, didn't trust him enough, didn't trust neither his abilities nor his intelligence so he can continue to be on his own. Sherlock acted nobly & John would've done the same; however, John would've brought Sherlock into the hunt within the month using an intelligent plan to foil the snipers.

Wish Mary didn't have to be left behind for John and Sherlock to continue.

Gosh, how sweet! I really like Mary in this one! I admit I was losing hope for them towards the end and I was extremely relieved when you turned things around. Well done!

It's a melancholy story. I always hope It could work out that John could have Mary and Sherlock, but that's probably unrealistic. The story was wall written though!

Great portrayal of the characters as always, but found it perhaps a little rushed, a lot happened in quite a short story!

This was brilliant, so sweet ending but I felt little bit sorry for Mary. Some sentiment is good every now and then.

Very sweet and simple. I enjoyed this late night read. Thank you.

I really liked this. Your portrayal of John's feelings of betrayal and anger, and his internal struggle were brilliant. Fantastic job, truly.