Hi, so Jack decided to start the procedures for the operation instead of confessing his feelings towards Elsa. Jack might be right when he is saying that if Elsa knew about his feelings and his disease, she would feel pity towards him, if she didn't have the same feelings. To feel only pity from the person that you love is a cruel thing.

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Hi it was so nice of Elsa to invite Jack to the party, this shows how much she likes him, and it was so hilarious the scene were they play video games. I never thought that Elsa likes and plays so many video games. But Elsa can surprise all.

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Hi, I was expecting for Anna to try to supervise Elsa and Jack on their date so in this way for her to see what they are doing. Anyway I am still glad that their date was so succesful and that Elsa had invited him to the gala. I hope that Kristoff will confess his feelings for Anna soon, she usually has him do anything she wants.

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Hi, this is an interesting concept to use in your story, this is the first time when I heard about this fictional disease. It can't be nice to vomit flower petals and to smell constantly of flowers, it might be ok for a girl to smell like a flower, but for a boy it might get a bit unusual. I wonder what Jack will do now.

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Hi, it was interesting to see these past events through Jack eyes, and how Elsa has affected him over time. I guess Anna will have what to say in her speech at their wedding. I can't wait to see how their date will go.

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Hi, well apparently Pitch will get what he wants, war, between Hestia and the United Nations. It is clearly that whatever was in that tea that was given to Jack is taking away his ice magic, and probably killing him slowly. I hope the trolls can offer a solution to this dilemma, since they were the ones that saved him the first time. The possibility that the history will repeat is terrifying, that like in the legend Jack will go to war and die.

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Hi, what a cliffhanger we got. Clearly somebody isn't happy about the fact that Elsa is going to marry Jack, and is trying to make Jack look responsible of Anna's stabbing by using his sword as proof. And now when things were going so well for Elsa and Jack. She was starting to confide in him , she had even admitted that she was in love with him, and with the ritual performed they were going to be married and now this, the stabbing. The question is who would have done it? There were few people in the courtyard so the list of suspects isn't very large, of course the assassin might have taken advantage of the fact that everybody was paying attention to Elsa in those moments. I do believe that whoever did it was with the intention of breaking the engagement between Ela and Jack, and maybe getting Elsa to marry Hans,the order would have come either from Hans or from ministers that are preferring Hans as their new prince consort.

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HI, I liked very much how the relationship between Elsa and Jack had evolved , from being strangers that are forced to marry by circumstances in becoming supportive and appreciative of one another. Jack having four older brothers remains me a little about Hans and his situation , while Hans was willing to do anything to gain power including marring someone he didn't knew, Jack is hoping to find love, even though he accepted to marry Elsa in the beginning out of duty to his father. It is also nice that you somehow had included Olaf in this story.

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Hi, I love that you incorporate other cultures in your stories, and this one is promising. Now the question is what is the empress during outside its palace and what does a noble got to do with a tavern from the dubious part of the city?

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Hi, Elsa is trying to study among guests when Jack finds her, and he is such a gentlemen by getting her food and drinks. And he is very observant of Elsa, since he realized that she is only eating sweets because she is nervous about her exam that will take place the next day. But also Elsa realized that Jack is attracted towards her and she to him otherwise she wouldn't have proposed dinner.

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Hi, in this story Jack lives to the reputation of his mythical counterpart "Jack Frost", he comes and goes with the snow. Cute the fact that now Elsa starts to associate the cold and snow with Jack.

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Hi, it is clear that the potion Pitch had given Jack is starting to affect him, we don't know yet the result of this potion, my guess is that is taking all the magic that once saved Jack away from his body. Also in this chapter is surpassing King James reaction to Jack and Elsa courtship. I mean it was quite obvious that Jack was interested in Elsa for some time. Maybe James considered what Jack feels for Elsa only a crush, to discover that it is something more serious. Solutions can be found to this dilemma, either Jack or Elsa can give up their rights to rule in their respective countries, or Anna and Emma can become regents in the absence of their siblings. Is Pitch also playing with James mind, or simply James doesn't want Elsa as a daughter-in-law?

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Hi, so first of all I hope you are fine, given the circumstances in which the world is in.
It was so nice to finally see Kristoff gaining courage and asking for Annas hand in marriage, of course Elsa will accept, can't wait to see Annas reaction when Kristoff will propose to her. I am glad that Jack and Elsa had finally discussed and resolved their issues. Jack is torned apart, on the one hand he doesn't regret that he had protected Elsa, on the other he is scared what this situation will mean to his country and his country's position within the Alliance. Now he only needs to fix his relationship with his sister. And Elsa, now she knows that Jack loves her just as much as she loves him.

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Hi, things are becoming more complicated, Jack's illness, that he keeps a secret of what happened in his trip(although I suspect that he can't keep that a secret for very much now), and that he is hiding himself from Elsa, and Elsa's fears regarding his feelings towards her. I suspect if the situation was the other way around and it was Elsa put into Jack's position she might have done the same. It is clear that Jack is struggling with this secret, I suspect that on the one hand he wants to tell Elsa the secret on the other he doesn't want to face her reaction, he is afraid that this will affect their relationship, without realizing that keeping secrets also has a negative impact on their relationship. I loved the introduction of Tooth in this chapter, just how I imagined her, funny and exotic.
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Hi, for of all congratulations on reaching 700 reviews, this is quite impressive. Second of all, this is such a nice and romantic story, Elsa had put so much care and effort in making those chocolates to give to Jack, and he was such grateful for the fact that she wants to be his friend that he doesn't mind that the chocolates were in fact horrible and he ate them all. Jack was feeling lonely and he wanted a true friend, which Elsa fortunately is. In time she might become more.
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