Uhhhhh, this is too brief for an introduction.

OMG I'm so glad she had the Phoenix tears for snape but lowkey wish she used some for Dobby's injuries :( his death always hits me so hard!

I just realised that 'Erised' is 'Desire' backwards

How is it that Ami can feel Harry's emotions?

She... she said her friend was white right? An albino? Oh man, I think I know exactly where Isa is going to end up *teary eyes* but I still hope not!

Woah, I was not expecting that! I look forward to reading more.

This was a really sweet chapter. I had been wondering if they would go together or not- it was definitely better this way ;)

Hello! I really like what you've done with your character so far. I find it rather interesting and wonder what will happen later on with your OC. But I do wonder why it is that you have lines throughout the chapters for breaks, but continue almost exactly where you left off. Wouldn't it be better to just leave the lines out?

Great story

I wish the kiss scene was somewhere else and not in place of Cho you know more original since Cho would be staring at cedric's pic anyways not Ami

That was a good chapter. Ami keeps a lot from her friends.

Here we go Ami to the rescue.

Excellent.

Good chapter. Glad Sirius is free.

That was a good chapter.