| Reviews for Arabian Dance |
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Holly of the Night chapter 1 . 10/18/2016 It's so fluffy I'm gonna die! That was a car doors. It's different. With Bulla doing ballet instead of shopping, and I like it :) |
feedthegrimmjows chapter 1 . 1/15/2016 D'awwww. I love the relationship between Vegeta and Bra. Hope you write more! |
nofcksgiven chapter 1 . 1/3/2016 Sweet story!:) One of my favorite thing about this story is how realistic it was handled... I love Bra and she deserves all good things but I like that she's not spoil here and she has to work hard for her spot in ballet school and things don't just get handed to her just bc she's Vegeta and Bulma's daughter and one of the two richest kids on the whole planet. I also love the interaction between Bulma and Vegeta and how they've learn to talk to each other and how hard they're trying to converse w/o it turning into a shouting match. Proud of my OTP.:) And of course, interactions between Vegeta and Bra were A plus. I love 'em. Vegeta has a long way to go when it comes to raising a daughter but even so, I love that he's very proud of her and thinks she's talented and the best and everyone who thinks otherwise are idiots, haha. They're moments were just lovely. |
Prl16 chapter 1 . 4/11/2015 Aw, I loved it! |
LeChick chapter 1 . 6/18/2014 Oh this was just so believably adorable (which is the best kind). The last line was great too. And I don't know why but I thought it was cute when Bulma called Trunks AND Goten Vegeta's boys. Well done :) |
Nova.8 chapter 1 . 5/30/2014 Yes, I do think Bulla has Vegeta wrapped around her fingers so a great one shot. Also at this stage I can see Vegeta exactly as you portrayed him. Not much of an arse that is. ;-) thanks for the read. But I have to say, I am waiting eagerly for an update to a Voyange Long and Strange. :-) |
Dino-Rogue chapter 1 . 5/27/2014 Fluff? Canon? Canon-fluff? Vegeta-style canon fluff? Nothing could be more awesome! Love this, love this! Sweet, so cute! |
Netag Silverstar chapter 1 . 3/14/2014 This is so adorable, I could picture every second of it. This is a great story, very well written. Well done, best of luck and keep up the great work! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2014 Wow! I like this! So beautiful! :) |
tomorrow4eva chapter 1 . 1/5/2014 Haha! I love watching Vegeta navigate being polite for his family. Excellent story. I loved how you wrote everyone 's personalities and quirks. |
Cheyenne83 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013 Fluffy indeed can you writh the piano part too i tink iTS funny how Vegeta wants too look inside the piano too see how it works |
NinjaWhisper chapter 1 . 12/4/2013 Cute. The interactions between characters had nice dialogue, especially around the breaking a leg. I just love Vegeta bonding with his family fics. |
Reflective Reviewer 7 chapter 1 . 12/3/2013 This was truly gorgeous. I love how you wrote Vegeta interacting with Bulma and Bra, it all felt very natural, and the dancing was just beautiful. It makes me remember the first time I saw this ballet, and I found myself smiling. Great work. RR7 |
Piccolo is green chapter 1 . 12/1/2013 I read this this morning on my phone in between eating breakfast and brushing my teeth (it was that good - I couldn't put it down). Thank you for making my Monday morning a great one! It literally put a smile on my face for the rest of the day and made the beginning of the work week a whole lot easier :) Sometimes we just need fluff, but what I love about your stories is that everyone always remains in character no matter what the situation is. Yes, Vegeta goes to watch a ballet rehearsal, but he would in this situation! It IS practically cannon! I love that you've made Bra a dancer and a piano player - I love Bra and spend a crazy amount of time thinking through stories about her that I never end up writing, but dance and music are always things that I associate with her. This is such a perfect story! I love all the little details too - the lavender scent, Vegeta hearing the heartbeats of the dancers, the way Bra moved... HELL, I even went and watched a youtube video of the Arabian Dance because I was so curious! Bravo! |
AYNATT chapter 1 . 12/1/2013 ME GUSTOOO, AUNQUE SE ME COMPLICĂ“ UN POCO CON EL INGLES JAJA. UN ABRAZO! |