Reviews for Bartered
HollywoodTwore chapter 9 . 3/12
I honestly don't know why this doesn't have more reviews, it's fabulous! Thank you so much for sharing, I loved it!
twimima7 chapter 9 . 10/28/2019
Those were hard times and a lot of suffering. Good story and happy Bella made the right choice.
twimima7 chapter 3 . 10/27/2019
Love the name Bird Thief and have to laugh at her sass.
PurpleRain27 chapter 9 . 3/2/2019
Loved this story, I do wish though that Alice went with Bella. Charlie is such an arse!
dixiechickie chapter 9 . 1/29/2019
I was the youngest of seven, and we picked cotton to make money for school clothes. No lie. I was born in 1954. My mother had 3 children and was pregnant with the 4th when her husband left her for a teenager he knocked up. Times were hard. She moved back in with her parents. Her father plowed the fields with a mule. Too poor for a tractor. Your story...geez I had it good compared to a lot of others. I'm married to a good man who makes a decent living, and bought me a laptop so I can read fanfiction : )
Thanks for your story~
MysterySan chapter 9 . 11/25/2016
Yes, the end was bittersweet. I wish she had taken Alice and her little brother along with it can't be helped now. Anyways, I enjoyed reading this story. At first when I started reading it I thought you made some spelling mistakes but then it struck me that you were writing in the southern dialect. It was really interesting for me as I wasn't familiar with it but thanks to you, now I know about it.
cullensrule chapter 9 . 7/10/2016
Loved it. I so wanted Alice to join her in leaving the farm.
dianscot chapter 1 . 4/15/2016
Amazing!
Cockerspanmom chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Eddie is a sly one. I think.
bonadea777 chapter 9 . 11/29/2014
Well, the ending is unexcpected but I still enjoyed the story and the language.
meelee72 chapter 9 . 10/27/2014
Aww, I really liked it a lot, but i'm sad fer Alice & Lil 'Un...
:/
But, yay for Bella. :)
meelee72 chapter 6 . 10/27/2014
Damn, them beatings are harsh.
Dammit.
meelee72 chapter 4 . 10/27/2014
"Lord, this is sin."

"You can repent later."

Ahh, lolololololol.
That was outstanding. :)!
meelee72 chapter 2 . 10/27/2014
This just has me in giggles..
I love reading in the accents spoken, like I did w/ DirtySouthDrugWars, & some of ur others.- I just really love it.

Sorry for blowing up ur inbox if u ever chk it- i've discovered u recently & adore ur work!

I recokn Bella ain't got no need 'tall to be ashamed, fer there must be sum good 'slainin bout ol college educated Eddie. She'll make a right fine wife fer 'im, iffin' he's in the market, which i 'spect he is.

;)
ChristyWIX chapter 9 . 8/25/2014
Huh, I hadn't realized that when Alice stayed back, when Edward came to get her that, that meant she was choosing her parents over Bella. If I would've understood that better, I wouldn't have been saying she needs to get Alice. Nope, she chose to stay . . . she can stay and deal with the consequences. I'm glad that her and Eddie found their happiness and that Bella is okay with all of it. I enjoyed this.
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