| Reviews for Bartered |
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HollywoodTwore chapter 9 . 3/12 I honestly don't know why this doesn't have more reviews, it's fabulous! Thank you so much for sharing, I loved it! |
twimima7 chapter 9 . 10/28/2019 Those were hard times and a lot of suffering. Good story and happy Bella made the right choice. |
twimima7 chapter 3 . 10/27/2019 Love the name Bird Thief and have to laugh at her sass. |
PurpleRain27 chapter 9 . 3/2/2019 Loved this story, I do wish though that Alice went with Bella. Charlie is such an arse! |
dixiechickie chapter 9 . 1/29/2019 I was the youngest of seven, and we picked cotton to make money for school clothes. No lie. I was born in 1954. My mother had 3 children and was pregnant with the 4th when her husband left her for a teenager he knocked up. Times were hard. She moved back in with her parents. Her father plowed the fields with a mule. Too poor for a tractor. Your story...geez I had it good compared to a lot of others. I'm married to a good man who makes a decent living, and bought me a laptop so I can read fanfiction : ) Thanks for your story~ |
MysterySan chapter 9 . 11/25/2016 Yes, the end was bittersweet. I wish she had taken Alice and her little brother along with it can't be helped now. Anyways, I enjoyed reading this story. At first when I started reading it I thought you made some spelling mistakes but then it struck me that you were writing in the southern dialect. It was really interesting for me as I wasn't familiar with it but thanks to you, now I know about it. |
cullensrule chapter 9 . 7/10/2016 Loved it. I so wanted Alice to join her in leaving the farm. |
dianscot chapter 1 . 4/15/2016 Amazing! |
Cockerspanmom chapter 1 . 12/17/2014 Eddie is a sly one. I think. |
bonadea777 chapter 9 . 11/29/2014 Well, the ending is unexcpected but I still enjoyed the story and the language. |
meelee72 chapter 9 . 10/27/2014 Aww, I really liked it a lot, but i'm sad fer Alice & Lil 'Un... :/ But, yay for Bella. :) |
meelee72 chapter 6 . 10/27/2014 Damn, them beatings are harsh. Dammit. |
meelee72 chapter 4 . 10/27/2014 "Lord, this is sin." "You can repent later." Ahh, lolololololol. That was outstanding. :)! |
meelee72 chapter 2 . 10/27/2014 This just has me in giggles.. I love reading in the accents spoken, like I did w/ DirtySouthDrugWars, & some of ur others.- I just really love it. Sorry for blowing up ur inbox if u ever chk it- i've discovered u recently & adore ur work! I recokn Bella ain't got no need 'tall to be ashamed, fer there must be sum good 'slainin bout ol college educated Eddie. She'll make a right fine wife fer 'im, iffin' he's in the market, which i 'spect he is. ;) |
ChristyWIX chapter 9 . 8/25/2014 Huh, I hadn't realized that when Alice stayed back, when Edward came to get her that, that meant she was choosing her parents over Bella. If I would've understood that better, I wouldn't have been saying she needs to get Alice. Nope, she chose to stay . . . she can stay and deal with the consequences. I'm glad that her and Eddie found their happiness and that Bella is okay with all of it. I enjoyed this. |