Beautiful writing.
The story is paced perfectly.
Every chapter is a gem

Wonderful story - loved it all!

Wonderful fic :)

Beautiful ending! Thank you!

Oh, what a lovely, satisfying ending. Great job!

I must admit, I'm a little bit sad. Not about the story, it's fantastic, but because it's come to an end. I genuinely looked forward to every update and was excited each time I checked the site. Now the story is finished, I'm a little sad that I won't have a new chapter to look forward to. Thank you for a wonderful story and please don't leave us waiting too long for a new one!

What a fabulous end to this story!
I love the name that Yathai and Hirgev gave the baby.
And the little interaction between Hoshi and Malcolm at the end was lovely.

Great chapter! I was really wondering how there could be ant hope for the Merixa. An epilogue would be great.

An elegant solution. And despite the wrong they have done, I can't help but admire Hirgev and Yathai's courage and willingness to change.

An elegant solution to a thorny problem! Well done, you!

Great chapter - everything is starting to wrap up.

Great chapter but the last line was the best.

Love the byplay between Trip and Malcolm, especially that last bit! You sure know how to end a chapter!

Another great chapter. Loved the banter between Trip and Malcolm at the end - everything slowly returning to normal.

You really did surprise me - I had no idea of what was going on - I was (and am) getting some 'odd vibes' off the whole situation . . . perhaps I think that despite the situation Malcolm should still feel quite guilty . . . maybe . . .