I CALL THAT JAMIE IS HER DESCENDANT!

When Jinny first speaks, I actually thought it was Luna Lovegood! Great story, can’t wait to read the rest.

Good story cool plot but it's to short something needs to happen. The portal needs to break and he ends up being stranded. If I were writing this I would have stranded him for a couple years watching his sister grow up. But also trying to get home. They face a bad guy as usual probably Younger pitch. then they finally figure out the problem with the portal and they say a long and heart breaking good bye and jack returns home only minutes or even days after he left like nothing ever happend. He returns to the North Pole and continues to live his immortal life never forgetting his time with Pippa.

Then again it's just a suggestion you don't have to do anything.

-Loyal reader

It was beautiful, a beautiful read...

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS ADORABLE! *sniffles and cries* I can't take all the feels. THE FEELS ARE EVERYWHERE!

Awwwww

Ohmyword! This was so PERFEct. I just- /perfect/. And it was so cute! I have no words... I think this is one of my favorite fanfictions ever now *sniffles cause of adorableness*

That was beautiful

Loved it. So sweet!

Awwwww! That was was one of the cutest things I've ever read! It was just so perfect, I can't put into words how much I loved the story! It actually brought tears to my eyes ;)

Oh my gosh! The feels, the feels! You are an amazing author. You had me crying all three chapters. I am so going to follow you. :)

I physically cried (am still crying). This is absolutely beautiful.

Awww...

This story was really sweet, and very emotional. I don't see very many stories of Jack going back to talk to his sister that are actually written well, so this was refreshing. Thank you for writing this. I really enjoyed reading it. :)

You have reduced me to a sobbing mess. God this was amazing. I love it. You are awesome.