| Reviews for While You Were Away |
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Oppaaaaa chapter 12 . 9/4 uptdate please |
Guest chapter 12 . 1/9 come on update make it this done |
HadeCharon93 chapter 12 . 9/5/2019 oh please come back, this has a lot of potential. I love NaruIno the way you have written the characters are so beautifully done. Please consider continuing with the story |
xangelicsin chapter 12 . 4/18/2019 A superbly written story... A little to tightly focused and not a lot of background story or detail . But enough to bring it to life ... and make me want to know a lot more . Still , one of the best Naru/Ino ... To bad it’s dead.. I would LOVE a complete Flic. Based on the events hinted at in this story line... from Naruto’s time on the streets to his time running with Madam Sin... Sasuke’s betrayal and aftermath... the training trip ... his relationship with Temari ... background on his old crew ... etc ... etc ... etc ... The Naru/Hina bit ... I will ignore ... it dose not really fit , they were like what? 1213 wen Naru to left ? |
xangelicsin chapter 12 . 4/18/2019 A superbly written story... A little to tightly focused and not a lot of background story or detail . But enough to bring it to life ... and make me want to know a lot more . Still , one of the best Naru/Ino ... To bad it’s dead.. I would LOVE a complete Flic. Based on the events hinted at in this story line... from Naruto’s time on the streets to his time running with Madam Sin... Sasuke’s betrayal and aftermath... the training trip ... his relationship with Temari ... background on his old crew ... etc ... etc ... etc ... The Naru/Hina bit ... I will ignore ... it dose not really fit , they were like what? 1213 wen Naru to left ? |
qalleesyawesome chapter 12 . 2/20/2019 Noooooooooo! Please update! Please update! pleeeeeeeeaseeee update! |
Vince Basile Jr chapter 12 . 11/6/2018 please come back with this story or write a sequel pppllllllleeeeaaaaasssssseeeeee |
Ky111 chapter 12 . 3/4/2018 Great story and I hope you'll pick it up again. I tend to read these sort of stories just for a bit of light fluff between the sort of stories that I prefer to read but this story ended up having some deeper elements that have piqued my interest. Anyway great work and I hope you'll dust this one off at some stage. Later. |
FRANKEN5TEIN chapter 12 . 1/2/2018 Bruv it’s 2K18! I need the update or I’ll low key die |
Ai102 chapter 12 . 11/29/2017 Just found your story and read it in 1 day. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
Luciendar chapter 12 . 11/23/2017 You sir are an amazing writer. Story building, plot devices, character depth, all amazing. Some cannon has to be ignored for your story to make sense but it's worth it. Incredible work. |
Luciendar chapter 4 . 11/23/2017 This chapter had me rolling. That tattoo bit with Temari was great. The Hinata thing through me a bit cause they wouldn't been like 12 but still funny. So why won't she let Choji slip her his 'sausage' eh? Can't wait to start the next chapter but had to stop and give props. |
Guest chapter 12 . 11/7/2017 It’s now 2017! Please continue this! |
DipstickMadden chapter 12 . 9/3/2017 Interesting |
FRANKEN5TEIN chapter 1 . 8/2/2017 It's 2K17 I'm still waiting man |