Pretty badass chapter. I can see a female!Harry turning out like this. The Wizarding World is backwards enough that it's entirely plausible.

Dude, I just want to say that I have to give a thumbs-up to anyone who can salvage Bella Swan into a decent character.

I'm glad the universe didn't blow up from Alice and Luna meeting. Also, could Mana just Obliviate Galatea's memories of Cadmus or all of her memories and rebuild her from scratch?

"Arresto Momentum! Really you idiotic girl we have magic and flying on brooms is one of the most popular things in our whole world. Catching someone falling is second nature to us."

But no as that would be common sense and end the story there. Also really? The entire world knows she will be raped and the law enforcement agree? This is my problem with bash stories, they don't make sense most of the time.

If people can't make bash stories that logically work they shouldn't do that type of story. Or at least warn that the story is crack for how mindbogglingly unbelievable it is.

another great chapter of a good story can't wait to see where you take this keep up the good work

awesome fic great work

Hey, this finally updated again! Yay!

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)

please contiue this story l love it!

can you update this story? i love it

Wow... Loving the combination of plot lines and can't wait to see how this all plays out, especially a powerful bella.

This chapter was pretty horrible. She took a walk through a magical village, encountered every primary character that betrayed / hurt her except for Fudge and Voldemort, and she didn't kill a single one

please update this story

Great so far, when's the next chapter up.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.