please update.

Jajajajaja me encanta tu historia es muy divertida

so many great fics are never finished, and this is one of them , but thank you for what you did post

e jebote navlažio sam se na jukača

KEEP WRITING PLZ

hope you come back to this story soon

I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ

Plz update

I hope that I am not coming off as rude- I think that if your story had better punctuation and grammar and all that it'd be much more easy and fun to read.

this is an amazing but you didnt explain what happen after minato seal the kyuubi and his soul inside naruto, how did they become an anbu, how did hari and kakashi meet, the events that happened before they turn 16&18

isnt eleven or twelve or thirteen years old suppose to go to ninja academy? why are they sixteen and eighteen and still un the academy? so confuse

Previewing the most recent chapter, the writing seems to have gotten better, but you should really update the summary to reflect your bettered writing skills.

Why is this read by anyone at all? It's horrid! Grammar, punctuation, simple sentence structure... NONE OF IT IS EMBODIED IN THIS!

I just love that there are people who actually read past chapter one. Good Lord, this writing is something else entirely! Such garbage grammar, punctuation and spelling! Study an English book and a dictionary for crying out loud!

Holy shit that summary...that grammar...haven't even read the story, but damn your English is horrendous.