Good on Will for finally upsurping Hannibal, but sad for his lost home :(

What a fantastic story - I absolutely loved it. Your characterizations felt spot on!

The word “incredible” does not do this chapter justice. It’s a masterpiece in of itself. I felt like I was actually watching an official Hannibal episode, I am in awe! Like Hannibal, I too felt electrified XD From this chapter alone, I have determined that this fic does not have anywhere near as many Favs as it truly deserves. Thank you so much for writing this!

i just realized that all of this is taking place in a hospital, you certainly know how to keep the audience engaged, well done.

I don't really know what to say that already hasn't been said by past reviewers. But damn. Everything is this entire store was absolute perfection. Every character was kept so true and your writing was just incredible. Thank you so much for blessing this site with your story. It was a hell of a ride but it is one that I will never forget.

This is, without a doubt, one of the best written pieces on this site.

True to characters and their relationships, perfectly constructed plot, excellent suspense, vivid surreal sequences, poignant turn of phrase. I enjoyed the utilization of subconscious motivations, and I agree with a previous reviewer that Hannibal is most compelling as an unknown quantity, even to himself (perhaps especially to himself).

Excellent utilization of Will’s character, through his “trick-pony” empathy, which made him able to be “with” other characters. He is in captivity for most of the story, and yet through his vivid empathy, he isn’t. Interesting character development of Will shown in the last chapter with his lessened reluctance for eye contact, the door counting, the ruthlessness even against himself.

The last four chapters are my favorite. Unpredictable and intriguing. And even as an observer, the moment of crushing doubt Will has was jarring. I enjoyed this story just as much as the series that inspired it, and pondered on it for days even after I read the last sentence, which is one of the highest compliments I can give.

I hope you are still writing, and I would love to read more of your works. Thank you for sharing this piece.

Doing the TV series justice is not a feat easily accomplished, yet you have mastered this difficult task with flying colours.
Un ouvrage délicieux.

Amazing. This is your design?

Such a beautifully haunting story. You really captured the essence of the characters and the relationships between them (especially that between Hannibal and Will). I just want to thank you for writing and sharing such a story that has left me with feelings of grief, frustration and a strange sense of contentment. I was caught from the very beginning and I have a feeling this story will stay with me for some time to come.
Thankyou again.

By the love of God this was the best story I gave rear featuring these two...I would love if u do a sequel for this story, I just know that it will be amazing just as this story was...

Oh my god the fucking role playing again. I can't take it. My heart just I AWFGLKCUJBOJYTFFUCGUGC! Honestly, you're amazing. And what I'm most looking forward to is when Will starts to think more dark thoughts. Murder thoughts. Murder thoughts where he is actually confusing hurting people. *squeal* hopefully that happens soon.

I'm sorry. I can't stand her. I don't see her appeal, and every time she speaks it just pisses me off more. I mean, its not just your Alana, it's ALL of the Alanas. And I worship your Hannibal. Really, ALL Hannibals.

Frankly, I wasn't to burn everyone to the ground for treating Will the way they are, even though I get where they're coming from. If I were in Will's situation, I would have snapped so many times by now. Like a fucking rubber band. Normally I try not to read fics that make me this angry, but this one is to good to quit. No matter how many fics I read, I still hate Alana. Which didn't help my anger problems but yeah.

THAT LAST SENTENCE I JUST

OH MY GOD THE FUCKING ROLE PLAYING HAD ME IN CARDIAC ARREST YOU EVIL GENIUS; YOU MONSTER! I CAN SEE IT ON THE SCREEN AND JESUS CHRIST THAT WAS SOME OF THE BEST WRITING I'VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!