The part about Gale is hilarious, I thought it was the best part. The whole thing is really good, can't wait for the next chapter

Kick ass fic! Update then!

amazing! great writing and great storyline. please please continue!

What on earth about Peeta?! grrrr... instead of bringing Peeta into the story you should make some HLS scene between Katniss and Johanna :D
But seriously, I like it how you're taking it. Johanna can't just fall in love all of a sudden, I like the way you're portraying her. Please update as soon as you can!

Ooo! I loved this. I have a soft spot for Hayhanna, so this made me really happy. I really like how you wrote her relationship with Finnick. I know a lot of Johanna fic writers like to make up the headcanon that Finnick and Johanna has something in the past, but I've never really bought into it. It kind of ruins Finnick's relationship with Annie and it undermines the self respect Johanna has for herself. She would never let herself play second fiddle to another woman, so I'm glad you put a stop to that before it got started.

Why yougotta put my bae gale down like tht. So i ship pastast freinds with benifts johnnick oneone fuckbuddie hayanna and till death do us apart a fuckedup relationship johale so me likey

OMG update! Please, I beg of you, update! I'm quivering on the edge of a huge abyss, waiting to know what's next!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!

Holy crap! I love this so much! Johanna has always been my favorite Hunger Games character and I absolutely adore your take on her. I have always been absolutely convinced that there was something going on between her and Haymitch in Mockingjay and I think that you wrote it perfectly (I always look forward for your takes on relationships, it is my favorite part of your stories. Whether it be Bruce and Selina, Katniss and Peeta, Dom and Letty, you make them all so real, human, and sexy as hell. Now you have totally worked your magic on Johanna and Haymitch) I read a review of the Catching Fire movie that said that it felt like Johanna, Finnick, and Haymitch lived in a R-rated movie that we were only allowed brief glimpses of. I felt like you did a fantastic job of allowing us a window into this darker more twisted world in which the older Victors are forced to live. I adore Katniss and Peeta and can't wait for them to show up, but these guys are definitely my favorites and you wrote them perfectly. Something about the way you wrote Finnick completely resonated with me and hit me right in the feels. Oh and grown up Prim rocks! I eagerly await more of this story and I hope your inspiration catches fire (hehehe) very soon

I'm really enjoying this so far, there's a great mix of things going on in this fic. Really exited to see where you're going to take this. I especially enjoyed the part about Galw trying to prove his manliness. Great Work.