| Reviews for When Lightning Strikes Twice |
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Guest chapter 29 . 8/16 Huh. How interesting! |
Guest chapter 29 . 6/19 It’s so f**king good! I cried so many times while reading and rereading it. Good job! |
manekochan801 chapter 9 . 3/10/2019 Strange, a few months ago I read this story, but now that I read it again it's something different, like the end |
icedshadows chapter 1 . 7/24/2018 merde: shit! |
AniMeOtaKuKiNg chapter 7 . 4/12/2018 How old Lampo in this story? |
UnkindWinner07 chapter 12 . 12/9/2017 I’m pretty sure Merde is Sh*t in French while Merda is Sh*t in Italian |
CherepMikhailov chapter 29 . 10/23/2017 thanks |
ReadingReadererReader chapter 29 . 10/17/2017 I liked this, a lot. Thanks for this. |
ReadingReadererReader chapter 28 . 10/17/2017 Wow, I don't think I've ever read a fic where the author introduces a new character the chapter before the Ending. |
ReadingReadererReader chapter 11 . 10/16/2017 "Now all of China knows you're here." Lol, really? |
ReadingReadererReader chapter 2 . 10/16/2017 This is interesting, there aren't very many good Lambo-centric fics out there. Thanks. |
ChaoticSimpleton chapter 29 . 10/7/2017 Well, that was sad... Ima just gunna cry in a corner for a while. |
ChaoticSimpleton chapter 2 . 10/7/2017 I have a question, why didn't lambo just harden his hands or fingernails ? |
DragonClanMaster chapter 29 . 5/26/2017 this last chapter made me cry... |
Nanahou chapter 29 . 5/1/2017 Aloha~ I finished the story yesterday, and I didnt intend to leave a review but well, your FF didnt get out of my head, especially the way you have portrayed Lambo. It really doesnt get out of my head. The way Lambo often has only one eyes open, seems relaxed, and on the other hand, doubts himself, struggles and questions his life and meaning like a real person made him such an interesting character to follow. Its almost as if he is alive. By the way, I love how he reacted to Lampo at the very beginning. Instead of helping Lampo out immediately, he, I need to quote (its just that amazing xD) "slapped a hand over his eyes, taking a deep breath. He peeked through a gap in his fingertips before abruptly closing his eyes. Still there.". This is soooo Lambo-like, and that the thing I really love! Or how he handles the loss of his family, how he analyses the situation, how he deals with the nurse and everthing. Really, youve got yourself a new fan, Lambo xD I could gush a lot more over Lambo but uh, back to the feedback: At first, I was confused where the plot was going, and Im still unsure about how much of a plot it is because Lambo was the victim of the grand schemes and lost individual in the whole mess. But later on, it was kind of okay- even if Lambo wasnt the driving force, he still managed to save Elena, helped the guardians (Primos flames, though, are still a mystery unsolved) and kept his promise. The way you write is very easy to follow and nice to read. A reader couldnt ask for more. Anyways, thank you for going through this and finishing this story! |