Amazing

This was i great story, I Thoroughly enjoyed it(Which honestly surprised me since i'm not a romance kinda person), It was a great story and i'm looking forward to reading more.

Oh my goodness! This was such an amazing story, it took my breath away! The plot line was flawless, and with such a perfect mixture of suspense and romance! The only problems I noticed were a few grammatical/spelling mistakes. Thank you for posting this story!

Wow... This is good enough to be published. I'd definitely buy it if I could. I love the world and all the protagonists are so wonderfully developed but I can't really say the same for the antagonists. I like how you've put effort into adding historical context but sometimes, it's not that particularly accurate. By putting the family parentless, you've avoided most of the more tragic aspects of being a higher class girl like forced marriages but there are a few tidbits that you could have put in. Besides, at the end of the day, it's a fictional story and artistic license prevails. You can do whatever the hell you want because you are the writer and nothing needs to be accurate.

even though it must be hard to write as a lot of different people you still did it and you were magnificent though another reviewer was right about the he/she mistakes you did they were quite minor the plot was great and your story even having different povs with different stories were all tied nicely to the main plot. i love the characters of the characters
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i don't know what to say it's brilliant fabulous
awesome
heartwarming
heartbreaking
emotional it wassss greeaaaatttttt the way you tied their stories
the way you showed their love
how you developed it
everything was amazing

Loved it! Just wish there was an epilouge of the future even though you already tied up all the loose ends

Your stories make me cry sobs. I really like the way you wrote romance and how everything tugs at the heart. I would like to point out though that you ought to be more careful with your use of pronouns - you often mistakenly write him instead of her or vice versa and since your stories features many characters and often depict scenes between be opposite gender, the use of a wrong pronoun makes it difficult to understand the story and that in turns make the story less enjoyable to read. In a slightly like serious mistake, there are times when you misspell words, or rather useful another word that sounds the same or similar e.g. wondering instead of wandering, you're instead of your. Sorry if it seems like I'm picking on grammar but after reading some of your stories I realised that this are some mistakes you often will make. It's still ok for me to understand your story because I already know these characters but I showed a friend who doesn't know the characters at all and it was very difficult for him to follow the story. On a side note, I hope you could continue your stories on the stolen treasures and the painting of the stars though no pressure if you find that you have no more desire to write them.

I have procrastinated on all of the fanfics xD life kinda took over but i am sooool glad this story is done and as always never fails to make me go awe, even tho i am currently in public and ppl think im crazy へ(へ)

How nice would it be if bill worked under red like how wally works under ruby.

Your story was very wonderful and thoughout, but I was really confused on this chapter. The action sequences had me confused, as to who was the bad guy and what exactly was the plan and the conclusion to all the drama. (For example, what does Sapphire's uncle have to do with all this?) I think you also rushed the story's conclusion a bit, because the oldrivalshipping ending, and mangaquestshipping's ending was also confusing to me. So I think you need to work on transitions between different character's point's of views. But, I did enjoy this story and felt that you did rush it and had quite a few grammatical errors, but it was nevertheless a fantastic piece of literature. You stuck to the setting, and developed the characters, and written a very thought out story. My only wish was that you put in more Oldrivalshipping moments because they are my ABSOLUTELY favorite shipping, but your development of the other shippings made me grow to love them even more! Please continue to write your stories and

OMG I FINALLY UNDERSTAND!
OMG now I know why you named the story THE MUSES and omg I understand why you made each female character have their own special interest that they couldn't replace. OMG... you don't understand how mind-blown I was after reading this chapter. I must say, you tied it all together very nicely, and CONGRATULATIONS on finishing this wonderfully beautiful piece. I loved how you took us back on a journey through history, with dashes of romance and mystery to it. Although it was a beautiful piece, the storyline was a bit rushed near the end, since you decided to shorten the number of chapters. Because the story progressed rather slowly in the beginning, I felt that your decision to write the story in shorter chapters, was the downfall to this magnificent piece. I loved the storyline, but I felt that Franticshipping's character development was rushed and their story was significantly less than the others. I also felt that Red's search for his parents' possessions also felt short. Despite some places for further plot development, I think this was still a wonderful read and Thank you for providing us with such a breathtaking, cleverly thought out piece.

Sorry! My review got cut for some reason. Anyway...

I think that this is a great story. Good plot, good characterization, and you stayed true to the time period. However, I think that at times, the story can be a bit rushed and you quickly jump from one thing to another. It sort of leaves a bit of confusion. Also, there is the issue of proper grammar. I think it would be beneficial to you if you had a beta. Other than those minor problems, I loved this story! I hope you keep writing amazing stories like this. :)

I think that this is a great story. Good plot, good characterization, and you stayed true to the time period. However, I think that at times, the story can be a bit rushed and you quickly jump from one thing to another. It sort of leaves a bit of c

hello, haven't reviewed this for a while, and now i really need to since this is too amazing that my heart cried from feels (*/m\)

and- soulsilvershipping, i didnt really ship that before i read this. it's just too- whoa, bittersweet? amazing? fluffy? omg i need to touch and play my HG (*/w\)
specialshipping too! red being blushy is too cute for me to handle (q)
i want to write more here, but i guess you don't want your review box full of my overflowed tears and feels ;;w;;

please keep writing! i really love your works, btw c: