| Reviews for RWBY: Competition Moon |
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writesout chapter 3 . 6/16/2015 Plot hole. Grimm dissolve after death. Not immediately of course, but after a fairly short time. Skinning a grimm and selling it would not actually work. |
scott chapter 15 . 7/17/2014 Thank you for your wonderful story. It was fun and entertaining and a read I always looked forward so seeing updated. Will be looking forward to your new works just as much. |
magnoliaorchard chapter 10 . 6/23/2014 Lol that's really smart... Competition moon being the fights, very dynamic |
Andrei - ddrhckrzz chapter 8 . 5/31/2014 The last part of this chapter satisfied me bro you did a splendid job making this! :-D |
Andrei - ddrhckrzz chapter 7 . 5/31/2014 Well now I actually would be interested to see the bad ending in this arc because that's just how my taste is sometimes (yes I am weird I know that very well) but I am enjoying the story so far still at this part of reading the story but I'll try to catch up to the latest chapters but at least this is another awesome story that will be very very awesome still on chapter 8 so far and I'll be off to sleep afterwards :3 |
DuelRoxas16 chapter 14 . 5/30/2014 i liked this chapter. a bit upsetting that we wont hear from her for a while but i reaply happy your going to continue the story. you did i great job and i cant wait to read more chapters from you |
Katsugi chapter 13 . 3/6/2014 ...Well, I had a fun reading this. I hope to see more. |
SOVIETxEAGLE chapter 13 . 2/28/2014 You are totally making me die inside for not knowing how Jaune and the girls will end up in the end. The drama is real. (Good chapter btw. :) ) |
destinyTail0 chapter 13 . 2/28/2014 Doom here. Doom there. Doom everywhere! Hoo boy, you got quite the story set up. And I completely agree with you on the whole Jaune being average deal. Although I'm one to talk. P |
MrSparky6277 chapter 7 . 2/16/2014 Past tense of ring rang |
MrSparky6277 chapter 4 . 2/15/2014 Also, sneaked isn't a word it's actually snuck. If that came off as snobbish I didn't mean for it to I just wanted to point it out so your writing can get better :) |
Pickle the chicken chapter 12 . 2/15/2014 So is it gonna be a separate story or another chapter, different arc? |
MrSparky6277 chapter 2 . 2/15/2014 Great story, but I wanted to point out that the past tense of wake is woke not waked |
LadWatcher chapter 11 . 2/11/2014 So... this whole thing was hazing? The fights, the feels, Jaune's epic resolves... all of that was just a test?! ... ... ... Best Fanfic Ever! |
venshade1 chapter 11 . 2/11/2014 looking forward for the new arc! |