| Reviews for Into the Silent Sea |
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Crimson.Siberia chapter 4 . 9/24/2007 This is still very good. It's almost as if it is part of Upon a Painted Ocean, which, technically, it is. However, it seems a lot more closely linked to its prequel than most sequels. Many sequels use the same characters but a totaly different storyline. Into the Silent Sea is an extension of Upon a Painted Ocean, and I like that alot. Great job! |
JoAnna chapter 4 . 7/8/2006 oh my gosh, you seriously have to update this! I keep coming back to it, hoping that it has been updated, but I'm always let down! It's so good, please don't turn your back on this story! Please update this story, it's one of the best stories I have ever read in the Weiss Kreuz fanfic area. You so have to update this, I'm begging you! I will love you for forever and ever if you do! Until then! |
A poor yet dear reviewer chapter 4 . 11/10/2005 P.S. I expect you to update every three weeks Or give the reviewers tiny chapter peeks. |
A poor yet dear reviewer chapter 4 . 11/8/2005 If you do not update I will surely come to hate Your lack of response To the dear reviewers. Of course, I already do. Since you've much taken longer Than my six month old fondue What has it been then? Two months? Two years? Do you still have apathy For your dear reviewers tears? So hasten, my dear And don't let us fear That your stories might spontaneously combust Or turn to tiny particles of dust In fact, by gazooks! Make some books! About noble sea kings and silly schnooks! And the world will rejoice Because your writing's first choice So what inspired this nonsensical rhyme? Do you dare ask? Of course, I won't make this end with the word "time" Since it is overly used with "rhyme" This was inspired by P.S. Speare! P.S. Speare? Who's P.S. Speare? Can you believe how many people don't know P.S. Speare? It's all to blame For your inadequate publicity If only you would publish Then the world would see How wonderful you could be Compared to that Shakespearan rubbish No offense to Shakespeare He's a wonderful fellow Who would often appear Just to say “Hello, I like jello” Please excuse these past few lines They're atrociously bad signs To signify that your dear reviewers Are getting a bit hullaboolic So please, P.S. Speare Be a wonderful dear And update as quick as you can Or else your dear reviewers Might give you a kick in the ACKPTHF! We love you We really do But if you continue to stall Then we just might have a squall Because that's how much effect you have on us The poor, poor yet dear reviewers |
BengalCat chapter 4 . 8/13/2005 heyhey I was hoping you'd write a sequel, and like it seems, I wasn't the only one... well... it's on my alert list now, so don't let me wait too long for the next update- or else .~ and do insert a little lime, if possible- pwease? on'y a little? *makes great big teary kitten eyes* ;3 ja na, Bengali! |
bffimagine chapter 4 . 8/1/2005 I see Mastermind is living up to his codename... |
Amakurikara chapter 4 . 6/2/2005 Hi! I just wanted to say that I loved this story and Upon a Painted Ocean. They are both wonderfully well written. Please update this story soon, because I really want to know what is going to happen. At least leave an author's note telling when you might update! Please? I can't wait to read more! Ja! AmA |
Haliled chapter 4 . 11/2/2004 Wow... I'm utterly speechless... *dryly* Well, maybe not entirely speechless... But stunned nonetheless! This is beautifully written, especially how you plotted out the writing structure. I love your writing skills. In fact, you even made me fall in love with Schuldich-whom I have hated ever since reading about him in the manga-but this story has made me have a more positive feeling towards him now. I mean, I REALLY like Schuldich in this story. Very charming. Yet he's such a devil. Please continue! This and Upon a Painted Ocean are both on my favorite's list! I hope you shall finish this ficlet! I'll be checking every few days or so... SO GET MOVING! You haven't updated since december 11, 2003. Which is nearly A YEAR AGO! *bristles* (sweatdrops) I'm sorry for bursting like that, but this story is just too precious to ignore. I've read several stories of Weiss Kreuz, and I know the differences between a horribly written story, and a story that should not be forgotten. This tale is one that should never be forgotten. Your stories...are astounding. Everything is written so beautifully, intricately and delicately crafted to your ways. Please, don't ever turn this story away. This piece of art is just too brilliant to ignore. It will continue to leave people in astonishment and wonder at everything this story has. The plots, characters, and of course, your will for writing. So please, I ask once again. Do not turn this loveable story away. I'm just overall absolutely stunned at your work. This is just bloody brilliant. Keep writing! ~eBooeBoo the Second |
jocanda chapter 4 . 4/13/2004 I've read "Upon a Painted Ocean" before and since I'm reading the sequel to it I have to say you've got a great story going on. Please update soon! |
mysterious double chapter 4 . 3/23/2004 I really am enjoying this story so far. Your writing style is fantastic and the historical references are wonderful additions to this great story. I really look forward to your next installment, so please continue! I haven't read a story so well written in quite a while so hopefully i'll have more to read soon, right? nudge nudge _ |
Unofficial Schwarz chapter 4 . 1/1/2004 I'm so glad you're gonna keep writing this no da! - The cliff-hanger in the last chapter was such a frustrating place to leave off! But then I was so happy to see you write another chapter! - Ran and Ken are so cute when they're clueless! ~Nagi |
Shinira chapter 4 . 12/27/2003 i eagerly await the next chapter i'm in love with your writing style and characterization skills. this is one of the few fictions i actually keep track of. |
tearlesereph chapter 4 . 12/22/2003 You've updated~! *yay* I feel so sorry for Schuldich, he keeps getting abused here or there. Whatever happened to Crawford and Nagi? |
Carter Tachikawa-not logged in chapter 4 . 12/17/2003 The story was updated and I never knew? ;_; Anyway, you've done a splendid job again. Augh, a cliffhanger! I want to know what happens. Damn, Ran is such a stubborn little boy. Gets shot and wants to go ahead with everything, he he. Anyway, keep writing. I love this. ~CT |
nauta iupiter chapter 4 . 12/12/2003 That has to be the best chapter within the entire scope of the story thus far. Ken holding Ran down and all he endured, and just the simple things that showed how much the two cared for each other, it warmed my heart. As always, the style is superb as is the content. My only wish is that perhaps, one day, Ran and Ken could share something akin to a kiss. It'd be sweet. Mind you, the subtle affection in holding his hand is just as powerful, but I'm a simplistic reader who still has a need for the more straightforward attack. Thank you for sharing your genius with us. |