Oshawott is still my favortie character/pokemon in the story.

Please continue this story, its the best one i read

I want you to kill yourself for thinking of this

awe so cute

Finally ash shows that he cares about axew as well instead if pikachu a ashachu

I kinda hate how ash cares more about pikachu and ashachu more then his other Pokemon please make it where ash cares about all his Pokemon instead of just his m8 and his son

Thank you so much for killing of Serena

Well, this story was certainly a journey! I thouroughly enjoyed the read (and I'll be starting the sequel once I've finished typing this review)! You, my friend, are an incredible storyteller. I found myself struggling to put down my phone when I was reading it. Some of the chapters legitimately caused me to cry (I think you know which ones), and the only other time I've ever cried reading a book was when I read Marley and Me! I laughed, I was shocked, I was sitting on the edge of my seat. The story actually tired me out on occasion because of the emotional roller-coaster it took me on. Not only is this one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, I'd probably even go as far as to say it's one of the best stories I've read in a while. Ivy the Snivy, I tip my hat to you!

Could you please make ash less bias because the thing it ash is obviously showing more love towards pikachu and ashachu then his other Pokemon

I hate amourshipping to mostly because
is a slit who thinks to make boy like her is to dress pretty
2.60% of her thoughts are of ash
a horrible trainer ash look like a guy who would like his girlfriend to be strong/passinote like him

Please don't let baby pichu die

I like the whole fanfiction story it's just I don't like how ash kinda a litter cares more about his pikachu then all his other pokemon

This is amazing (even though I kinda ship zoura more with pikachu then ash)

I didn't know pokemon cold read

YYYYAAAAAYYYYYYY! OSHAWAT FINALLY HAS A BOYFRIEND!