I love that rock is using to Awsome and the story is awosome too

This is story is actually not half bad, expect for a few grammar. You should proof read you're story before submitting it, that should help.

this is awesome... I love the plot and and how to k isn't weak anymore. u my Friend have made an awesome story.

please post soon

This is pretty awesome! Please update soon!

good story keep it coming

Update!

Not really a sex Scene. But you did a Good Job though. About Time Rock is being useful in a fight. If he can deflect one bullet with a sword despite his short training. Just imagine if he had a couple years of training.

Must Rock always be ao weak in each fanfic

GO ROCK! Him being Sword God is beyond cool!

loved it
and it was nice

This is so good and interesting, keep it up

EPIC! Update soon, cause revenge Revy tagging in with ol'Chinglish will be awesome!

Ah dahling, I do quite enjoy this story. The concept is great and I found myself completely enticed by it. However you may want to watch some of the grammar errors. You used "your" instead of "you're" and a few others. If you'd like, I'd be more than happy to look over your future chapters for you. Just let me know.

Jaylonni Love

Omg I got really scared there for a minute! Haha I'm a writer too and I'm a terrible procrastinator, so I get it but plzzzz update soon!