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![]() ![]() ![]() Jen only said no TV and no phone, she never said anything about the movies so there is a loophole in her instructions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Middle name changed nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get it Kit(Kirsten ℹyana odd) K.I.T |
![]() ![]() ![]() Better kid than I would have been, nothing should prevent a real friend from having your back and for family to abandon you...even worse. I would have taken the punishment and remained silent. These are law enforcement kids, these are not the back biting political kids. Never turn your back on a friend or family. This was rule #1 and it was treated like nothing even by this team, betrayal to Lexi times two... :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! Jenny is concern that Lexi is taking Spanish, but when she said that she already completed AlgebraI didn't fight to get her into a math class that she hasn't like geometry or something else? Why take a class she already took and mastered it? Welcome back Kate :-) |
![]() ![]() My AbbyCat likes to sit on the keyboard. Yep, I named her for Abby Scuito. |
![]() ![]() ![]() u should do a story with all the sisters with kate in charge.u write her as such a stern big sister and mom. wonder what she would do if her sisters messed with her lol would she spank them all? |
![]() ![]() Not really sure *why* Lexi feels like she should've been told about Kate. That situation doesn't affect her at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Ally! You did a fantastic job on this chapter! I LOVED it! I love Lexi and Jen's relationship it is SO sweet and loving! You write your characters fabulously and ahhh! You just did an amazing job! I mean, honestly, you really don't need my help editing your fics (not that you needed much help before). I honestly didn't notice any mistakes! Great job, Ally! Can't wait for the next fic! -Rachel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed the epilogue. Hope there's another Lexi story someday soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Found it interesting how Jen handled Ziva & Tony' s disobedience in chapter 11. Also find it interesting & entertaining how many different characters spank or discipline each other in the various chapters & stories - i.e., Jen spanks/disciplines Lexi & Ziva, but Ziva also spanks Lexi. Lexi is the only one who does not spank anyone, lol. And the there's Gibbs, of course, & no one spanks him, except for the very rare playful swats by Miz Nettie, lol. I found ch 12 interesting. Didn't see that scenaio coming, but looking forward to seeing what happens next! ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job, loved this chapter. Poor Lexi, it is tough for a tomboy when an event requiring formal attire, namely a dress, comes along. It is also sad that Lexi is worried Jenny is taking on too much with her being 'part of the package' when Jen marries Gibbs. I am so glad Jen assured her that was not the case. Again, great chapter and I am looking forward to the next installment in this series. I assume it will include Gibbs and Jenny's wedding :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job on this chapter Ally! I realized I never reviewed it! Whoops haha... I love Lexi and Kirsten (even though they are quite the little troublemakers ;)), and I can't wait for more stories and chapters about them and their adventures! Great job, as always :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting way to get the girls to solve their problems. Liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! So sad to see it's coming to an end soon. How are things going with you? |