PLEASE ... read the manga or at least watch the anime ! Shuiichi's eyes are NOT, and I repeat, NOT BLUE ! Arrrrrrgh ! They are Amethyst, or Violet if you will. (shades of Purple), but never blue. Ryuichi has the blue eyes. Yuki's are gold, Tohma's are teal (blue-green), everyone else has brown eyes !
Sorry, but this one of my "stickler" points that tells me the author has not done their homework and is writing characters they know nothing about.

Nice story!

shus eyes are purple. not blue

Um, one word: aw

So cute. Loved it to pieces so, in otherwords, great job. ]

For some odd reason when I saw the name Ryan Springer I thought of Jerry Springer. xD

Well anyways...so far I'm really like the story. 8D

Interesting... OOC at times, but still pretty good.

aw that was so adorable i absolutely LOVED it! I'm so glad it had a happy ending. you did a teriffic job with this fic, it was amazing!

~Jess

this was such a cute story! i loved it. you did good.

LUVED IT

Wow... just... wow... This was amazing. Just... wow... (aww, you've left me speechless) It was so good, I almost cried. I

Hey this is a good story keep it up

Wow.. that was a really cute and interesting story! I think you have a solid writing style and you stayed pretty much IC with all of the characters! I wish you would write a sequel - but it did seem to end really well by itself also!

I like it so far, it's great!

i love your style

I really did love this one, it did really touch me deeply. Arigato.