I love this chapter!
Guiche dead!
Osmond and Colbert presented as absolute failures as education providers.

please continue, I want to see louise(bitc*) dead or arrested in brittania or something like that, never liked her, please continue.

Darn it. I was really hoping for Saito to kill Louise in this fic in some way..,...

Oh, I'm salivating in anticipation as to what this Saito will do to Guiche... but I'm also slightly concerned about some of the phrases used in this chapter. You have't read On the Wings of an Eagle by Sufficient Velocity on Spacebattles by any chance? The parkour, Tabitha's near-save and Dog segments read almost word for word.

Sorry, but I'm not exactly sure I like this story. I kinda hard for me to root for protagonist who lacks one of the biggest morals of all: Valuing human life. I mean come on. He didn't have to kill Guiche. That's taking it to far in my opinion. If Saito just pulled a "The Dark Knight Returns" Batman vs Superman, where he says "In all the years to come, I want you to remember the one man who beat you", I would have been fine. But you can't mix Captain America and Deathstroke together and expect a lot of people to like it. I was liking his character until he killed Guiche.

Get dunked snobby Halkegenian mages!

Justice has been served. But there are always more people that need to be sentenced.

Yisssssss...

I hope Saito kills them all. Down to the last man, woman, and child. And that he makes them suffer for this injustice. If Louise can't die directly by Saito's hand, he must find a loophole! And have her watch as everything she has faith in, all that she cherishes, is desecrated. That evil girl needs to be tortured most brutally.

Oh how I wish he could slice up that animal's body and throw it all over the continent. That filth of a human called Louise is the most utterly disgusting creature I've ever heard of, it deserves to be torn into many little pieces. :)

Once I went to this page my awe filled eyes went to a sarrow state

Good story keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter.

Me: CUT YOUR HAND OFF! Great story by the by.

OMG PLS, PLS CONTINUE! T.T This was an AMAZING ZnT fanfic, really! Although there were some mistakes, i think it is fine to continue it. After all, the slips u did like students ignoring Saito stabbing Colbert didnt really affect ur overall story, honestly i dont feel tat it is THAT bad a mistake to the point of u dropping the fic T.T. A rewrite is fine too, but i think its better to continue this fic, especially when the last chapter was a cliffhanger. PLS, if u hav the time, update! Whenever u do, i will always be here, waiting.

I am so glad this fanfic is abandoned. It brings nothing new to the fandom. It's the same old same old.