Grow up. Joke or not, just grow up.

Okay, so my friend showed this to me and I died! The first sentance just killed me and I eventually was able to take the horrible spelling. I can't believe there are actual fanfictions like this on the internet that are actually posted like this and NOT trolls! Also please notice the korean at the end of the story "oppan gangdam". Do you people even know what that means? Oppa is a term used towards a boyfriend, but why would Korean terms be in a Anime Fanfic? The mysteries of a weeaboo's mind will forever be unknown . . . Great troll story!

ROFL
I also love the slight Rochu XD

I will give a language lesson to those of you who made terribly-insulting reviews demanding that the author use "proper English". Hate to break it to you sweethearts, but you need to learn proper English yourselves. You seem to not have paid much attention to your first-grade English classes. Here we go:

1) Iggycat95 says: "...no one is going to read this rubbish until its proper fucking English."
-Do you see your mistake? I don't think you do. "Its" is not the right word for this sentence, because it is typically used to refer to possession. You should have gone with the contraction, "It's".

2) Eww says: "...p.s. lern to spell for god sakes...pp.s everyone hates u so u might as well just shut up and leav so we dont have to suffer anymore whos with me?"
-Wow I don't even know where to start. You are criticizing this author for using abbreviations, when you yourself are using them. You spelled "learn" and "leave" wrong. You're missing the apostrophe on "don't", and your entire review was a run-on sentence, sweetie.

3) Sey-ChanFan2001 says: "...IM GOING TO HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU! YOUR NOTHING BUT A BIG FAT POOPY PANTS...SUCH A GAY MOTHEE FUCKER AND A STUPID WHORE SLUT PROSTITUTE HOE...ITS PROBABLY BECAUSE YOUR STUPID FATASS UGLY MOM WAS SO STUPID ND DUMB THAT SHE DIDNT LOVE YOU...YOU HAVE NO LIFE ANS YOU NEED TO STOP BEING SUCH A FAIL TROLL...OH AND FYI STOP BEING SUCH MEAN TO SEYCHELLES-CHAN! SHE AND I SRE BEST FRIENDS IN REAL LIFE AND YOU MADE HER CRY BECAUSE YOUR SOOOOO MEAN!"
-Bruh, you need some supplementary English classes. You forgot the apostrophe for "I'm", "it's", and "didn't". Twice, you used "your" instead of "you're". You spelled "and", "are", and "mother" wrong. You're supposed to put commas after multiple consecutive nouns and adjectives. Lastly, it's "stop being SO mean", and not "stop being SUCH mean".

4) Chikouu says: "...Your spelling and grammar is horrible..."
-It's plural, hun. It's "your spelling and grammar ARE horrible, not "IS horrible".

5) Heyr says: "Learn to spell this ff was not even worth Reading you little shit need to go to school and write without using fucking numbers this should be taken down cause if gives people so heavy diarrhea..."
-MAJOR run-on sentence. Why is the "R" on "reading" capitalized? You spelled "it" wrong. And remove the "so" from "gives people so heavy diarrhea".

Of course, saving the best for last...

6) Guest (the last review on the first page) says: "fuck you you peice of shit you suck ass i couldnt read a single fucking sentince of this garbage so learn to spell or go die and i hope you get banned and get hit by a car because your such a stupid motherfucker who disrispectful toth e english language stupid shit go kill yourself and ps you cant report me for not liking your shitty ass story it was total shit anyways its my opinion so shut up motherfucker"
-DO YOU HAPPEN TO KNOW WHAT A COMMA IS? WHAT ABOUT A PERIOD? AN APOSTROPHE, PERHAPS? YOU NEED A VERY LONG LESSON ON PUNCTUATION, MY DEAR. You repeated "you" on that first part there. "I" always has to be capitalized. You are missing apostrophes on the contractions "couldn't", "you're", "can't", and "it's". You spelled "piece", "sentence", and "disrespectful" wrong. Finally, you seem to have misused your space bar. It is "to the", and not "toth e". Are you sure you know proper English? Because your prowess isn't very apparent either. At least the author was doing it on purpose.

I'm fairly sure I missed a lot more stupid errors out there, but these were the ones that stood out the most. Advice to those people who judge: before you tell someone to become grammatically-proficient, please make sure that you are as well. Otherwise, you will be what the English language calls a "hypocrite". Goodbye, now.

So by the way, to all of you flamers out there...check your reviews, I beg of you. Because a vast majority of the ones complaining about the spelling and grammar in this fanfiction have spelling and grammar errors on their reviews too.

You laughable hypocrites.

I'm friggin crying right now...you miraculously managed to capture every single aspect of these kinds of smut fics hahahahaha (but somehow, this thing's still better than Fifty Shades of Grey..has anyone read that new Grey book? you're gonna cry. "my cock concurs".) XD

This story... It was absolutely amazing! The grammar, the spelling, the troll! I can't give you any criticism for this, it's just too good. I don't and can't understand why people can't accept real works of art! Maybe they're just jealous of all those fabulous writers like you. Anyway, the story held so much detail and the plot just blew me away, I'll share this on Facebook and Tweet it to all the noobs online. Once again, I love your writing and this is just a work of art. Thank you.

Sarcasm, obviously. :)

Even if this is a troll, my head hurts and I think I just became dumber... Amazing attempt at a troll-fic!

Hello! Kori here. I'm afraid that I can't really add constructive criticism. I honestly tried to read this and I really do love trolls. However, because it was written in Texting lingo I wasn't able to read it. Dyslexia is a pain, lol. Well, good night!

Hello! I like this fic. It doesn't really make sense but its funny! I just couldn't understand it. At all. I don't speak "txt talk" at all. Maybe if we could have a translation? But it's not "da best fic in da hole wrld"... I like it as something random and funny. Not as a fanfiction. Sorry...

And seriously, to the rest of you idiots, can we please be a little more, I don't know... FUCKING MATURE?! Oh my fucking god, why are you telling a real live person to go kill themselves and shit like that over some stupid fanfiction?! I mean, I thought all the people in a fandom could at least respect eachother... I guess I was wrong. I don't give a flying fuck if you don't like this fic, just be a little more fucking nice! I'm really upset with all of you...

I think I just peed myself xD This was one of the funniest things I've read in awhile, shame on people who call it trash or spam. (At least read the warning to understand the joke before making a shitty comment to insult the work.)

It definitely portrayed extremely well how the most 'Reader' FanFictions end up. I'm looking forward to your next work

oh my god xD

i cant i just died laughing at at this shit

ah yes we should all rename orselvs [naem]-chan-sama-senpai-sama-desu-chan so kawayi XD

WTF XD I WAS LAUGHING TOO MUCH

I rate this 1000/1! So fabulous
I think purposely writing something this bad takes great talent. XD
But I think Igirisu needs to find Amerika and get a room… :3