Amazing story! Never really sure why authors like to have their female characters get scarred/raped/unable to have children, seems to almost be a norm in Naruko fics. But, either way I think this is a great story, easily one of the best complete NarukoxSasuke fics and I adore the family actions of Mikoto, Itachi, Shisui, Tsunade, Jirayia, Kakashi, and Iruka. Truly enjoy the heartfelt moments. Hope you come around to doing the remake or something in the future. Best!

You should have said,”The match between the scum of the earth and the Uzumaki clan head is starting!

I'm sure your story might have great potential but I don't support unnecessary bashing of characters as you've done to Sakura.

Why didn’t Kakashi get Obito’s other eye? He could have just gotten it and BOOM! A pair of Mangekyou Sharingan.

Narukos kinda overpowered and its lowkey annoying
I wish there was something that stopped her from doing something like... idk she just holds too much power and it seems like everything is too easy for her it kinda puts a damper on things if she's able to knock someone out in a couple moves.. like one punch man..idk

best

I don't normally do this but I feel the need to, even though this story is actually old.
Firts thing first, when I read that you were raging about some mean comments I thought "there's no need to be mean and write mean things to someone you don't even know!"
Then, I understood why the reviews were like that, and it is bc the plot is difficult to follow (I'm not saying this bc I am some 12 year old, I am at University) I'm saying this bc you take waaay to much time at explaining the whole thing and that makes us, readers, to lose interest in the story, you don't actually know how to make us intrigued. Or...maybe English is not your first language? I guess so.
Second I know that this is rated M for some reason, but I couldn't help but feel disgusted at the lemon scenes. I felt it sort of hypocrite; first you were saying how much he loved her and then you just wrote that? you just make it go sin. Instead you could've written a smoother lemon to not ruin the romantic vibe; something focused on their feelings for each other, of how much love they felt for each other. But no, you just made sin of it. You don't know how to make a good plot nor write a good romantic fic. Fanfics like this just make me wanna stop reading Fanfics. You should keep practicing babe! I don't wanna be mean, but since you are so obsessed about scars then maybe you'll read my mean comment, rage about it, it'll make you stronger and a better writer, sweetie! Take care babe xoxoxoox

Great story and I didn't want it to end.

Why are they getting a new Hokage so soon ? Tsunade hasn't even had the position for 5 years.

this pisses me off i home thea suffert a painful death

I liked the lemons

that's pretty funny I loved your little Prank, I read the ending all the time, just wanted to say I love your story's all of them.:)

Ok so I’m only on chapter 30 of this story but this is the 5th of your Naruto stories that I’ve read I just generally don’t comment . Yet because I do see the author notes and as a writer who’s greatest critic is myself I know how stressful it is to doubt your work . I just want to say you are an AMAZING writer I was hooked from your first story that I read and downloaded more and added what was ongoing to my alerts simply because I love your style. The plot lines you come up with and how you take your time to build something different in each story so it isn’t the regular fanfiction is amazing . You take the characters and make them your own in ways not many people do . Keep writing keep pushing forward and keep following your own style and path . Ignore the people with closed minds and ignore the flames because misery loves company and you’re doing amazing . You are an awesome author and I’m happy I came across your stories , and I’ll continue to read as long as you continue to write and have confidence in the fact that if your work wasn’t so phenomenal people wouldn’t keep trying to go out of their way to tear you down . They’re mad that they don’t have the spark that you have and that is a problem for them not for you . Please update your other Naruto world stories when you can ! I’ll be reading !

That moment when you realize
Sasuke waited over 3 years for that moment

Orochimaru...
Pedophile...
Pedomaru...

If I were asked to find the difference between the three things I just listed, I'd say I couldn't find a difference.