Reviews for When You Break
pesesita08 chapter 1 . 3/10
Man, the meaningless sex broke my heart, I could feel Mikasa's emptiness and lonliness while reading. They both have a simple porpuse or reason to do this, but for her it's just more than that; IT just makes me feel sad
HannahClyde chapter 1 . 7/14/2019
This so sad, but really well written! Congratulations !
Maybe you could write a sequel where they actually tell each other how they feel haha.. i'll be following your story!
pihip chapter 1 . 10/16/2018
I remember reading this years ago, but sadly I was too stupid and ignorant to appreciate what a beautifully poignant work it is.

I also like how it stays somewhat vague and doesn't point to any specific episode in Eren and Mikasa's lives (with the exception of that one day in Shiganshina that changed everyone's lives forever), because that way I can pretend this is happening during the current events of the manga, after the carnage that was Liberio. It's only a fantasy, but one can dream - I would certainly enjoy Eren sharing his weariness with Mikasa when no one's looking over him going full edgelord while casting away everyone.
ii-Phoenix-ii chapter 1 . 9/16/2018
This was beautifully written! Them using sex to fill up the emptiness left by all the tragedy and Mikasa wishing for more. And dammit Eren, you're dying, quit running away and spend every minute together. But it makes sense too, the way he was written. Ah, the frustration. Over all, it was quite sad and touching and well done
Aewina-chwan chapter 1 . 4/27/2018
Beau. Triste. Magnifique. Douloureux. Rien à redire...
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2017
This is so beautifull.. and sad
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2017
Omg omg that was so good I wish you write
More but great job
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2017
that was... sooo beautiful...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
wow, that was truly touching to read. thank you for this. I hope you can write a follow-up story
IraTamashi99AmyliaZanpakuto chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
This is actually quite a tame smut, I really like it. It was kind of sad but a brilliant story nonetheless :)
bardofspace chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Whywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhwhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhywhy :'(
Jess chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
The best fanfic about Eren and Mikasa I ever read because you really got the right feeling.
Dorminchu chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
Oh, doggone.
This was perfect.
They're just kids, I would expect them to act like this.
...
DX
Ugggh.
Seriously, that was beautiful!
Floweravenue chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
This story is at the same time: beautiful, sad, emotional and poignant. It's very hard to write something like this. But you've done it very well, even with a smut! I'm really impressed. Very well done!
Maggzdaspaz chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
I would really love to see a continuation of this, because goddamn it was so good. This just makes me feel so many emotions and I just... Wow. I kinda just wanna see how Mikasa feels after this going on, and if she decides to speak up.
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