I just finished reading what is left of this fabulous fanfiction. I'm so glad I did, because it truly was something amazing.

I'm quite sad that the author hasn't updated it for some time, but maybe one day they will resume. I'd be overjoyed if they did. Although slightly, and I mean SLIGHTLY out of character, everyone in this story was great. I think it's actually very plausible the way you portrayed Zim, and all the other characters. I hope you write more like this! I found a couple of mistakes but they were just missing letters in words. Maybe try Grammerly? Anyways, thank you so much for sharing this with the world!

This was quite wonderful. I loved it. Please don't listen to the haters my dear, there are far too many of them in this world. And to one very specific hater in the comments, talons and claws are almost the same thing. It's okay to use them interchangeably. And to the author of this fic, I hope to one day meet you.

Must.. have.. more..

Shiiiiiiiiiiiiip? Ship! Ship! Ship! Ship.

"OUR SNAX! IT'S OVER! RETREAAAT!"
And, yes, zim always finds a way.

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeees! This is a really unique plot, never thought of that before!
Yes, spill the tallests blood, Zim. (Even though I ship the Tallests)

That last part was so cute! I really like this, its a theory I never thought about. Keep up the good work!

I can't wait to see what Gir is like with the upgrades!
Please continue this fic.
Would you consider explaining what the Tallest mentioned when they were talking about all the programs they put Zim in? Like the Invader program, or the Warrior program or all the other programs he passed in about half the time it should have taken?
And why did the Tallest not expect Zim to survive and pass any of the programs?
I want to see Zim do impossible things again!
If the Tallest think Zim is as dumb as he acts in the show, why are they scared of him?
Why is Tak considered impossible to beat?

(rapidly slamming hands on table) PART 4 PART 4 PART 4 PART 4 PART 4 PART 44444444444444444 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Please show us more semi-smart!Zim.
Please update and continue this fic.
Is Zim just playing dumb in this story?

I WAS VERY VERY VERY DISAPPOINTED WITH THIS, I MEAN COME ON, ZIM IS BETTER THAN YOU PORTRAYED HIM TO BE. FOR STARTERS ZIM DOESN'T HAVE TALONS, HE HAS FINGERS, AND THE TALLEST NEVER SPEAKS OF ZIM AS BEING (INVADER ZIM). YOU CLEARLY STATED THAT THE RED TALLEST PLACED HIS HANDS PALMS ON SOMETHING... WHAT IS A HAND PALM? LOL! CHAIRS ROLL WHILE FLY, I COULDNT BELIEVE THAT, BUT MAN I READ IT. IN THE FIRST CHAPTER YOU SAID ZIM HAD TALLONS, BUT IN THE THIRD ONE HE HAD CLAWS... LOL... THIS STORY NEEDS HELP, AND I HAVE TO SAY I WOULD RATHER READ THE LITTLE MERMAID, THAN READ THIS, BECAUSE I HAVE WATCHED ALL OF THE INVADER ZIM CARTOONS AND OWNED THEM AT ONE POINT IN TIME.

I love this and I hope Zim keeps Hus promise to GIR I love that little bot

I'm kinda neutral to this so far. I think I need some more chapters before I decide though.

will this be a Zim and Dib friendship?

Thanks for calling me awesome xD