Hey I don't even know if you check these anymore but wanted to let you know I loved this story. I think its well written couldn't wait to turn the page so to speak. I wish you would continue and if you ever decide to i would be beyond ecstatic. Hope you continue writing(and continue this story though I know its a long shot) and use this couple again. I really enjoyed reading this much but anyway enjoy!

So, I read your offer thing and I was wondering if someone had already replied, but if not, you could pm me at Flying Cookie Dough Bunny.
God that's lame. I'm sorry. I couldn't be bothered to sign in, XD.

Ive already got a multichapter fic going on, so I cant really write anything more right now and update religiously, but if your interested I am always happy to be an idea generator or editor or something of the like. I literally have ALL the plot bunnies, and would be more than happy to help you get through this, I have also been writing for quite sometime and taken several classes on plotting.
Looks to me like you've got a good sub plot, but no main direction, no game changer. You want Alfred to get better, and Arthur to be the one to heal him, but how? Just figure out how you want to go about it (subtly or suddenly, through a traumatic event or an awkward circumstance, or anything you want) and once you have the direction you want to take it, everything else is just filling in gaps.
Again, if you are interested in anything I've said, want me to elaborate on some things, or you checked out my writing and thought it was passable, you can PM me, and we can go from there.

I have quite a few ideas. Perhaps we can write it together? If you feel like it? I wish I could explain more right now, but I have to get ready for school... Ugh. If you have any questions or comments, just shoot me a PM.

Aw... D: Oh well. I guess there's not much you could do if you completely lost inspiration for it. You had a nice idea though.

Ewwwwww... Touchy Arthur... Wow... ... Hmmm... Thorn

An update! Finally! Annalise, is that female Francis? Arthur should just mail that damned letter.

Ooh, Arthur's getting a bit mysterious :D

Yay! An update! Danke! Its wunderbar :3

im going to guess that annalise is Arthur's sister or maybe she took care of him too?

And now we're gonna get into Arthur's past? Awesome.

Oh intense chapter. Arthur seems to have Alfred pegged pretty well, not sure if we've gotten into his history yet, but I have a feeling it'll be interesting.

Anywho, till next time.

Drama! :D

Oh my God! Alfred actually died!

"That doesn't mean I don't want to be something more!" Onhonhonhon Arthur is beginning to like Alfred!

I kinda want to slap some sense into Arthur.