I was really enjoying the story. You have is listed as complete. You should change this to incomplete. It is cruel to have people get into your story only to be left hanging.

Great start. I can't wait to read more.

There was one flaw that I noticed towards the end of this chapter: it says a broken 'rip' rather than a broken 'rib'. Besides that, I liked it

I wish there was at least some kind of transition chapter, but I suppose when you're just 'done' with a story you can't force it.

I'll be sure to check out the sequel.

I'm excited to see what you do with the sequel! Definitely loved this fic so GOOD LUCK!

great chapter hope you update soon.

It's almost frustrating how self-sacrificing Raven is. It's understandable, but still.

This story is still a thing? Who knew?! I'm excited for more

I'm so happy you're back! Hopefully you update again

Can't wait for more!

Wow not finishing this is an insult to us all. Im super happy you made this fic but not finishing it is hurting my soul. Even though it's been two years, you should finish. For your readers anyways.

OH MY GOD I LOVE YOUR WRITING

Such a great story! Can't wait to read more:)

I Like,I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

I know it's been awhile but this story is really good it'd be a waste if you didn't finish I hope you didn't forget about it