Reviews for The Crucible
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2
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Blue Arrows chapter 4 . 6/5/2017
Really excellent. Great characterization and storytelling, especially given the unique situation (and a pretty interesting situation too ;) Thank you!
Guest chapter 4 . 12/13/2015
amazing
Caro chapter 4 . 4/23/2015
A really fascinating story. I really liked how Sherlock really never gave himself fully in the end. He was true to himself no matter what was thrown at him. Really well written and interesting concept of what an alternate reality could be like.
BeyondMyReach chapter 4 . 5/28/2014
very, very interesting idea and nice execution. thank you for writing.
rosez-have-thornz chapter 4 . 1/19/2014
That was a perfect ending! Couldn't have been ended in a better way. Sherlock deserved to get back home. And John coming in to save him just seems so right. And how everything worked out with his Molly.. I am very pleased! Thank you for a very enjoyable story!
BenAddict Holmes chapter 4 . 1/18/2014
What a lovely end to the story! I admit, reading about the other Molly torturing Sherlock was a horrible experience for me but the happy ending sort of made up for it :-)
whenisayrun chapter 4 . 1/17/2014
OMG THANK YOU SO SOOOOOO MUCH!
I have tears in my eyes and I'm so happy right now :-)
No one has ever dedicated a chapter to me!
When I saw it I was speechless and couldnt believe it!
Thank you so much. It's an honor 3
now to your story: a wonderful and complete ending. I'm so happy about the fact that Sherlock is finally home and can be with Molly. I didn't except this ending and was very happy about it.
The last kiss was so sweet and I loved the whole dynamic in the last scene.
A wonderful story and it was fun to read...so thanks for being a fantastic writer.
Can't wait to read a new story from yours
see you there ;-)
4May chapter 4 . 1/17/2014
The old science movie mentioned, is it Flash?
At the end, I felt a bit bad for Lady Molly. Hope that she gets her happy ending, whatever that may be. She was so wicked in a good way, that you can't help but like her.
I really enjoyed this story! It was very entertaining with the perfect ending! Amazing work.
rosez-have-thornz chapter 3 . 1/15/2014
Wow, good chapter! I'm glad this is how Sherlock gave in rather than from sexual torment. I feel like at some point I want someone else to come through to this universe, like the real John or Molly or both. But even if that doesn't happen I'm still enjoying this dynamic of Dominant Molly and forced submission in Sherlock. Update soon please! :)
whenisayrun chapter 3 . 1/15/2014
Yipppieh
A new chapter
Liked it very much
John is Sherlocks pressure point
Can't wait what you have next in store
4May chapter 3 . 1/15/2014
Oh my! I'm blushing!
This chapter was BLOODY BRILLIANT! Excellently done! Sherlock is so egotistical. Loved finding out about the rest of the group. A battle has been won, but who will win the war?! GO MOLLY!
4May chapter 2 . 1/15/2014
Molly vs Sherlock. Here's hoping that Molly wins. I enjoyed reading this chapter. This story is a wonderful break from the norm! I hope that there will be an update!
4May chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
Loving this! A world where females rule! Love this Molly, she's so kick-ass!
whenisayrun chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
I enjoyed reading this chapter
but OH MY..
poor Sherlock
cant wait to read more :-)
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