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Shadow.nao chapter 2 . 6/13/2018 How could you leave it there!? Please update! Awesome fic! |
Bloody25 chapter 1 . 11/27/2017 i think panther Sounds cute |
ale.luna.35 chapter 2 . 8/5/2017 Ohh I really like this xD goes to favorites! |
Desses Gothique chapter 2 . 8/15/2016 I love. The kitsune devil fruit |
Titania1796 chapter 2 . 4/22/2016 Actualiza quiero saber de que trata la trampa de Luffy y lo que hace |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/24/2015 When are you going to updated Chapter 3? |
Brazilwolf chapter 2 . 5/25/2015 Can't wait to see what happens since it is very interesting how Ace Sabo and Luffy met |
FAN chapter 1 . 1/13/2015 I really love how you started this fanfic. No fruitiness about how beloved she is or how smart she is, you just go straight into it. I am a fan of this style and you write it quite well! I like that you made her full name Luffia and didn't change it to Lucy or Ruffy or some weird name with no connections. I like that you made her an independent little girl with an attitude. I like how you broke Ace and Sabo in, though I would like to see more of them shortly if possible. I'm glad you gave garp a kind of split personality or belief about Luffy, he seems crazy enough. I look forward to seeing this showdown between garp and luffia, it seems to promis some laughs. I also think you did reasonably well as far as grammar and spelling goes. Once again I say GO LUFFIA with luffy as a POSSIBLE nick name. Now onto the devil fruit. I KNOW you have pressure for a zoan fruit. But that does NOT suit her style AT ALL. I mean yeah Luffy tends to be hand to hand but how would any fights go with being a wolf or a panther or a gator or a lion or whatever else normal zoan you are being told to do. How would that work? Maybe you have a better imagination than me (probably because you actually WRITE fanfiction but still) I can't imagine that even with training that Luffy could be as inhuman or monsterly strong as she is if she's only an animal I mean in cannon as a male Luffy was able to BEAT zoan users (not easily but they had OTHER powers too). SO I am casting my vote to be wind, because it's a very versatile weapon she can learn to harness. However if you are DEAD set on Logia, might I ask for a mythical zoan such as a hellcat or something that is actually made to fight with Luffy's direct style. My apologies as I don't want to tell you what to do, but this story has SO much potential, you just have to build it there, and I have heard neko neko no mi one too many times. But it's your story,do with it what you'd like. I encourage you to think outside the proverbial box though and not do a zoan fruit and I encourage you to please take care of yourself and be sure to update ONLY if you have some SPARE time, as a story as good as this can wait. THank you so much for writing! |
KeepHopeStayWhelmed chapter 2 . 11/4/2014 Please continue this one and Neko as well! I want to see more from both! |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/25/2014 Continued the story is really SUPER! |
quirkybread chapter 2 . 7/8/2014 I think you should do a wolf devil fruit. This is a great story, please update soon! :) |
xXDia-RoseXx chapter 2 . 3/8/2014 Ahaha kind of interesting, please update :) xxDR |
flee27 chapter 2 . 3/6/2014 ooooooh she did it now. luffy seems more... tactical, like a wild cat on the hunt. can't wait to read what happened to grap ha he deserves it |
tuskkins chapter 2 . 3/3/2014 Pleaseeeee contineeeeee |
Just Another Dead User chapter 2 . 2/24/2014 I love Luffy the way you made her! She's fine don't change her! This story got me laughing a lot and my parents were giving me this look that said 'are-you-feeling-alright?'. Anyways! I love the story and idea! Her Devil Fruit could be the Wolf of Time! Sounds simple right? I think its interesting! But I don't mind if you have different ideas. I want you to update this story real bad! Leaving us on a cliffie of a good story like this *pouts* its not fair! I hope you find the time to update because id love to know what happens next! - Red |