wow, you're a cunt

That... was THE best Itachi-Sasuke reveal conversation... I have EVER read.
By FAR.
Sasuke's reactions were SO visceral and SO organic... I can't even describe. That was AMAZING. And so, so satisfying. I hadn't realized how much I NEEDED to hear Sasuke say (scream) all those things at his brother...
I mean, I like Itachi. I really do. He's a fantastic character, and I think he did the best he knew how given the hand he was dealt.
But he. Effed. Up. When it came to Sasuke. I'm not sure Itachi ever understood just how badly he hurt his brother. So it was INCREDIBLY cathartic to see Sasuke express himself here, and communicate to Itachi how much he's destroyed Sasuke's life (intentionally or not).
I am saving this chapter as a document and keeping it forever.

I dig the action and everything but jesus its far to long. I feel like a you can make these action sequences like half as wordy and it would be far better.

Also, I love the moments with Naruto and Hinata it's really cute. I wonder if sasusaku will happen in this fic.

Holy crap this story was so awesome to read! The fight scenes were epic and the overall writing was fantastic! I wasn't expecting Sakura to lose her eye like that, but it was a really interesting twist. I really liked this!

This was such a good read! Simply amazing!

Can’t pain just fix the paths? There was one who had the ability to fix them

You’re amazing at writing fighting scenes! I love how it’s so action packed and a true struggle not a fast and easy win! Your writing is so immersive too!

I am 100% here for that Uchiha brother reconciliation action sweet JESUS take the wheel

What the fuck. What the actual hell. OH MY GOD DANZO YOUR ASS IS GOING DOWN AND ITS GONNA BE GLORIOUUUUUUS!

I FUCKING KNEW HE WASN'T DEAD! THERE WAS NO GHOST SHOULDER TOUCH TO LET NARUTO KNOW HE’D PASSED ON! FUCK YEAH I KNEW IT!

Pain: I am a god you cannot defeat m-
Kakashi: I bet it was Naruto or my adorable Yamato

Everyone else: SAKURA COMIN IN CLUUUUUUTCH

Yo. YO. I was about to split for a second cause I thought you were gonna erase Itachi’s backstory, but I have a rule that I always finish the first chapter. Plus I’m like. 78% sure that I’ve read your stuff before and loved it so I am settling my ass in for the LONG haul. I’ve shipped SasuSaku since the beginning of time and it was my first ship (rip Cartoon Network) but Itachi will ALWAYS be my favorite character and I am SO looking forward to your portrayal of him!

That was a great read, despite the less than compelling title :p

Thanks again, hope they will be a sequel

good chapter, how can it end in one only?