I have spend half of my day today reading this story and it’s now 1:59am I just finished reading it. I loved this story so much. This story was one of the best Jason coming home and reconciling with Bruce and the rest of the family, I have ever read. I have read a lot of these types of stories so believe me when I say that is one is one of the best. I love and prefer Jason with with black hair and the white streak, but it’s your story and if you want him to have red hair then he can. One of my favorite parts was when Bruce was telling Jason his thoughts when he was thinking about signing his adoption papers. I loved all of the references to the old comics and they really added emphasis to the story and Jason’s thoughts and feelings. My Robin origin story for Jason that I liked the best was one when Dick gives Jason the Robin costume because it’s an honor and right of passage to be given the Robin title and costume by the first Boy Wonder, also it’s Dick’s way of showing that he approves and knows Jason will be a good Robin. The way you wrote Jason’s and Bruce’s long conversation was phenomenal. The words really hit me and I could really feel and understand their powerful emotions and thoughts and understood their issues and struggles with themselves and each other. It was aggravating at how slow the conversations went and how it took them so long to voice to their emotions, thoughts, and admissions, but it was worth it. It would have really added more emphasis and emotion to their conversations if Jason broke down crying and Bruce followed not long after but it was still just as powerful with out them crying. This is the best writing and story I have ever read, you did a phenomenal job. Thank you so much for writing this story. You are an extremely talented and excellent writer and I hope you continue writing and write a book someday because you would be an amazing author.
~Christina

Damn. Daaaaamn. Major kudos for fleshing out this Jason/Bruce confrontation in such depth

I l oved it so far. I liked how Dick was still joking and the dialouge.

Twas a compelling story. Thoroughly enjoyed it did I.

That Little Red Riding Hood and having Jay laugh wth a well played Rourdan was awesome .

Loved this chapter. Heck I love ur whole fic. Love how Dick was awake

Wow fantastic. Really loving Jays internal fight. Love how it’s al building from everything that’s been sad to him different lines he’s remembered from each person stuck in his thoughts. How he thinks about and expands on more of his childhood.
Wow it all ties in so incredibly well.

Wow this is a roller coaster of emotions. It’s written so well u can feel their emotions. Wow respect to Jason. How furious he is but he’s only fighting the birds and bats to hide his pain. And because of his thoughts that he can’t trust anyone and everyone is out to get him. Omg. This is an awesome chapter.
Bruce really got through to him.

And gah why did someone have to ruin it by being about the open the door when they were both making soo much progress. I hope the person opening door doesn’t spook Jason..

Wow. One incredible chapter. Absolutely loved the heart to heart between not only Bruce and Jay. But even the Leslie and Jay.

Love how it’s all connecting. Jay is picking up on what Leslie said and adding it to what Bruce says. And just the thought processes. And just emotions. It’s incredible. Wow.

This chapter was fantastic.
Wow. Aww love protective Jay. And love how you have written the snarky comments. Haha their interactions are fantastic.
Did the capt marvels not go into the room with the birds and Dick ?
I thought they all went.

Love how Jay was gonna let the Demon into the room first if there was an order. Awww

Wow. I loveee the whole dynamic between the Robins. That was a really great chapter. Thanks. Really good interactions and characterisations

Tried to murder the kid slightly

Feels

Great story! Wonderful details on the reactions between Jason and everyone! And very impressive that you included other members of the DC Universe like Flash for your purposes of buildings Jason’s mind. And nice lead up into the ultimate discussion between Jason and Batman by including a detailed place like the justice league hospital. You did not cut corners crafting this story! Masterful job!

Dude...this was seriously amazing with all the psycho drama, family fun...love the demon spawn, he's great. Timmy is great, I even like this Jason despite his...vocabulary.

Definite A-level story

Dick playing opossum is so awesome! I was going to mention that until I read you already thought of it.

Little red riding hood is soooo awesome.

Now I need a front row seat to the BatFamily drama once he comes home and the dynamics involved in getting everyone not to kill each other.

Also, had I thought about Nightwing almost getting himself killed just so he can get Jason back because he a manipulative little...bird. hahahah.