Reviews for Forging Ahead
MAYAKO chapter 3 . 1/29/2019
...love...
cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute
mayako chapter 2 . 1/28/2019
sooooooooooooooooooooo kawaiiii!
Guest chapter 9 . 3/16/2016
Last story please!
HappyMe-O chapter 9 . 3/1/2016
These are so adorable. I love Sanji and Usopp. Their so rare!
ashlynhope28 chapter 9 . 1/30/2015
I'm seriously just melting. I started your story tonight (Breaking Through Walls, that it) and lemme tell you it is now 5:33am and i am obsessed. you're amazing.
SniperingSardine chapter 9 . 10/15/2014
Holy dang! I haven't showered you with words of wuv since December?! What's wrong with me?!
I shall head to the mountains to repent for my sins.

...Buuut before than- *bows low* I'm really really sorry! argh, life sucks, and I don't even have one. I've no excuse. I'm a terrible terrible person.
...Would hugs make up for it?
Apparently my last review to you was for ch 6 ... Was it really? Honestly? You serious? (I was rather unawere you could see reviews before. Man, is it useful...But...REALLY?!) So, let's get in going! (I'll be brief, as I am preparing for that mountain-trip in the meantime)

7) This...whole...thing...Oh, Gods. Okay, maybe I can't really comment on it. I would love to, but I feel like my crappy vocabulary would not be enough to analyze the deep thought into characterization. I myself get rather lost in it, I'm so simple-minded *sigh*...But man, did you /nail/ it. (Oh, Usopp, it's perfectly natural to find that alluring, ohoho. It's just Sanji pulling out sexiness out of his sleeve like he sometimes does.)

8) ...I know I said I love you, but have I ever said how much? Because I just died a little inside. In the very, very good way. For some random reason I just really love Franky and Brook interactions, and that was just- hnnnnngh. I can totally picture it, too- all that drunk awesomeness. Also, I love those little statements about Brook not really having eyes but being referenced...uhh...Yeah, I'm kinda sleepy right now, my writting might be sloppy and weird.

...Would it be very bad if I left it at this for now? Oh, darn... I'll...I'll be back. I-I might disappear for a...long...while...B-But I always come back! Promise!

(...Did I really not review after ch6? REALLY!? YES, I'M STILL HUNG ON THAT. WHAT.
Also, I'm having random deja vu feelings.)
Cappy chapter 3 . 1/16/2014
Would I like to read the plot of their heated fanfiction? Um, how about "hell freaking yeah!"? Really though, this chapter was freaking precious. Here I'm supposed to be a rational adult, and here I am squealing and rolling around because of this. You really have a talent for writing these characters!
foxfire222 chapter 8 . 1/14/2014
ha, that was great. i would have loved to see Franky's face at the end there. to bad i have to imagine it myself instead. still, even with that, it was great. hope to see more soon
shinaiko chapter 8 . 1/13/2014
I spent the holidays in a place that doesn’t have internet so, sorry for the late review. And thank you for the four new chapters!
The “Candy-chan” one was very creative. It’s nice to see unexplored sides of their relationship being approached. I can’t recall seeing another fanfic with Okama!Sanji though. Also, Usopp topping ftw.
In the chapter five the quote that you used fits so well. It makes the whole story more meaningful and cute. Enies Lobby always makes me melt, SanUso is so perfect.
About this chapter, I just wanted to say that I know how Franky feels. In a way is kind of sad when these things happen. I mean, when a friend starts dating someone.

And, wow! You ship Usopp with Perona. I never thought about that possibility. If one day you have a plot idea with this couple, I would like to read, seems interesting.
Also, if it’s not too much trouble to ask. I noted that you did Brook’s chapter in the third person. Do you have any criteria when choosing the narration? And, you intend to post these one-shots on AO3?

As always, sorry for the bad English and looking forward to the last two chapters.
Diplomatic end chapter 7 . 1/4/2014
Loved it!
SniperingSardine chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
Owhatheww
I didn't even have time to comment on the fifth drabble! (and how much I love spiders, and how my fear of them surpasses Sanji's by 75%)
..actually, if you do not mind, I will elaborate on it now. (or...did I...? crap, I don't remember anything anymore...though I'm pretty sure I didn't)
*ahem* So, yeah. First things first. Dream!Usopp's a dummy for smashing that poor spidey, daww. I would have voted for grabbing Sanji and getting out of there ASAP. (hm, yeah, that sounds legit. Usopp does hold/drag/carry Sanswan at every given opportunity, doesn't he? That's another thing I love about 'em.)
Also, Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets was kinda fresh in my mind when I first read it...I guess mini merry arriving to save them would have been too 'what the-' ?
(oh, and I have to wonder about the female spider thing, hurrdurr)
I love how Sanji's famous quote is used for spideradorableness. Yes, their relationship is well-balanced indeed. (hmm, Jaya? Don't pull? oh-what-a-cute-tarantula?yep?...that also makes me think of SanNam. What would THESE TWO do against a spider legion? Huh? lD )
What else, what else...oh, yeah. Going back to balance now and mentioning ZoLu. I once wrote, (Sanji POV) "Right. Greenie and Strawie have their buddy-matching sense of direction." or something like that. But I guess that as long as Luffy can stretch him arm and magically grab Zoro wherever he is, everything's fine ;)
To end this- do you know how much I wish for an orange hat? Ace's or not. I've got orange shoes, orange scarf...c'mon, gimme a hat already! (actually, that'll probably be my only present this year. God bless you, my dear and only friend in this world... Even if you're buying it with my money.)
*yaawn* Man, that took a while... Now for this piece of Brook-hell-yeah-ness!
Three skull jokes- An applause for you my friend! Gotta love Brook and his inconsistencies. (and I'm totally not bothering to check if some of the words I write even exist right now...sowwy, but I guess you'll understand me just fine?)
What can I say about this one? Brook witnessing a lovely moment...and being yelled at because of hiccups. (These two are quite in synch with the yelling...Just remembered when they both yelled at aokiji...group-yelling isn't uncommon, but that just caught my eye :P hehe)
Annd I know that if I leave now I probably won't be back but-but-daww,will you forgive me?
I've got some leftover cake! You can have it!
Also, Merry late Christmas and...Happy New Year I guess! Good luck and all that stuff! *no,I'm not really an expert in holydays...I only know that my time seems to divide by four*
I gracefully bow to your almightyness (?) (I...do need a psychiatrist.)
I'll be back when the wind calls my name
Zombietooth chapter 4 . 12/19/2013
This is an awesome continuation of Breaking Through Walls :D
Sanji has got that right, Usopp is really cute :3 So far that oneshot about Usopp's superhero comic with Sogeking and Mr. Prince was my favourite, though I really liked every piece of yours.
I can't wait for more updates from you!
shinaiko chapter 4 . 12/15/2013
Sanji being Sanji around girls is definitely something that can cause trouble in couples with him. But is also charming in a way I think, because is an obstacle he has to overcome to prove his love. In this case I think you write it well, with Nami helping and all. I also want to mention how I like the way you portrayed Nami. I can see her being like a big sis to Usopp, and helping him is so nice of her. I kind of like they as a couple too, but a friendship-side with them is also fine (when the main couple is SanUso).
The end makes me want to see if Sanji really learned his lesson.
The question about my first language, it is Portuguese. And about Chopper-man, it’s a spin-off manga. I think it is now in the fourth volume. In the anime he appears in the episode 336.
SniperingSardine chapter 4 . 12/13/2013
Pageboy caps are awesome. I have two. And only because there's no friggin decent shop in my town. (My #1 secret fetish...is hats. yup. then there's ties...glasses/googles...baggy clothes...You can guess that makes me love Usopp-darling even more.)

1) Zoro. C'mon. Who doesn't love Zoro? Random fact: if it weren't because it's damn long, I would call Zoro "The Ultimate Master Of Shipping". He just so happens to be one of the characters I suck most at drawing, though. ...doesn't mean I don't try.

2)I don't really have a list of fav charas...it's more like...a chara cake. Zoro, Usopp, Brook and Robin would be in the very core...Nami, Luffy, Chopper and Sanji somewhere in the middle...And Franky would be...the...covering...? (You should have realized by now that my cooking level is comparable to that of a three year old kid) So, yeah, completely ignoring the fact that I hate cakes for now, I guess you get the picture?

3)Daw, that song! I think I only listened to it once...(I'd rather understand what I'm hearing...I'm just dat weird. And sound fails me now...Gotta check it out again...sometime...when my pc is not being an ass...)
You know, Usopp's pretty much a social bee. (I myself am just a bee...period. Fufu. That's funny because my name literally is bee. I love cracking jokes only I'll understand-even if they're really lame. You should try.)

And now...
Sanji not realizing he noodles. Oh, please, he totally doesn't. Nope. Not even a little. How can he when his brain is just a puddle? Nope.
I can imagine...Sanji being a noodle puddle over some girls...Usopp getting mad and commenting on it...Sanji then entering "imma-kick-you-into-oblivion mode" and going all whazzabout chivalry and the rights of women...and the girls just leaving like that...and when they both realize...Sanji regains his functioning brain and goes "well, whatever, let's continue our date." ...Usopp would make him pamper him. 'Cause Sanji soo tootally woould.
(..random stuff goes on in my head...and situations as well...I'll have to draw all of them.)

Hmhm! You know what I'm thinking right now? ...That I want whoever-it-is-that-stepped-on-Usopp's-hand 's shoes. Oh, and slap ''im. Can you do at least that for me? w

With this humble request I leave today.
Though maybe I'll be back later.
If I forgot to mention something.
I probably did.
Whatever.
Ciao!
shinaiko chapter 3 . 12/6/2013
Sorry for not being able to do a review in each chapter (I’m really bad at writing in English ‘‘ORZ). But, first of all, I want to compliment you for the weekly updates. I don’t know how you can do it, I myself find so difficult to do an update to my own fanfics (even the ones I’ve a few chapters written). That, and I like your writing style.
When I finished reading B.T.W it felt like something still was missing. I like how it ended (especially that you do make an end to Robin’s mission). But, maybe was that shipper’s feeling unsatisfied. And then you write those one-shots series about it, and I can’t stop from giggling at every scene again.
This chapter in particular was so interesting. And I think I know what fanart you’re talking about. The concept of an AU superhero with that couple sounds interesting, really, you should write about it (maybe like chopper-man, it would be hilarious. Chopper would make a good side-kick...).
Thank you for writing for that lovely OTP. And I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
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