so can I write a long pamphlet about chase gracie . He is an amazing character. so far he is my favorite narrator by how relatable he is even in his righteous anger.
I'm beginning to warm to Allura. Does she mind the business that pay her ? no hell to the no. Is she overwhelmingly reactionary? yes. despite it all, she is an interesting character allowed a range of many emotion, and in the role of the loyal sibling she shines. her interactions with Eric are getting better. . finally, Eric is Eric. this is inarguably the chapter I prefer so far. it is closer to what i already know of your writing. and special mention that in 6 chapters the plot has been laid out perfectly

I liked this chapter a lot. the relationship between chase and Allura is cute and one of the best thing about this fic so far. I love how you have taken the time to develop supporting characters and how they tie to Allura. and that cliffhanger . I assume rene is the real killer. and let see how the demon sideplot comes together

well that meeting went south real quick, and Allura's mouth getting her in trouble since the Roman empire. let see where lead the arrangement

oh I didn't expect to find out about the big family secret, but it did surprise me because I thought she was something magical and pure. demon is a nice twist. the part of the plot including sookie will be what I don't look forward to , but I trust you to actually give a soul to Sookie and make me care about her and creepy Bill.

well... this chapter has a bit of everything. we had the packed action. the mystery is bigger and I like it. what is in the Gracie's blood? the million dollar question. good job leaving the Easter egg and setting the clues for how special Allura is.
I know the story is romance and drama. but some lines are comedy gold. the khaki pants line came out of my mouth before I read it. again where is the cringe?

so CHELEEEEEEEEEEEEEE... you promised me cringe and it wasn't cringy at all. I like this prologue a lot. I'm glad we got backgrounda fucking mystery as well with the medium?mother and Erin? where is he?and worth noting, the first person point of view didn't disturb me as it will always do. I liked Lurie's inputs because she is cheeky and funny. onto the next chapter. awww before I forget , Chevy is an adorably irresponsible man, but such a likable character. now chapter 2

Hope to read more soon.

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Uh fuck no. I really hope Allura finds out about Alistair and fucking rips him a new one. I would tear someone the fuck up if they ever spoke to my brother like he did. Alistair is now my most hated character, I’m going to be honest. He’s creepy, where the fuck does he get off on kissing Allura while she cannot give consent, nor can she object. And throwing Chase under the bus about what he wanted to talk to Alistair about? Uh-uh. Fuck no. Alistair is a selfish dick and this chapter makes me despise him. Atleast Eric didn’t kiss her while she was unconscious and, okay, I can give that he isn’t much better counting he and Pam forced her to wear an outfit she wasn’t comfortable in, but honestly in the end, they listened to her and gave her a new outfit. Fuck. But I do love this story and am so happy that it’s here for me to read!

This was a really good story. I try to avoid unfinished stories but when I saw this was written by you, I decided to read what you has do far, it was brilliant.

I know it's been 3 years since the last update, but I still hope you'll eventually continue this story. I've been reading non stop, and I adore it!

Pleas, please, please continue it!

So I have read evwrything over the past few days, and oooh. Loved every minute of it. Thanks for this. Love the Fire Fae aspect. Allura is a great OC. Please continue to be awesome.

I hope u keep writting its been a long time since i fou d a story that actually captured my attenetion and made me want to read even more... Yr an amazing writter and i hope to read more of this amazing story

Update soon please

You are one of my favorite authors and I love your fics, especially this one particularly. It has been so long since you updated it, I really hope you haven't abandoned it. I feel like its only just started even though you're 25 chapters into it. I really want to see where the story was going. You have all of these great plot points built up and you have your readers at the edge of their seats. I'm just dying here with unanswered questions. It would mean a lot to me to know if you are planning on continuing this story or if I shouldn't get my hopes up. But, this story is amazing, you're amazing, I love you.

Hi ! Just a few word to say that I absolutely love your story, I read all the chapters during day and night. I seems like it's been a year since your last update and I hope everything is fine. I, as a lot of people here, would like you to continue this story since it's so awesome ! I'll keep it as my favourite, waiting for a small alert in my mailbox :) good luck !