I think you should finish the damn story first before attempting to rewrite to prove to yourself and others that you have the determination to see it through. On the other hand it seems like you are probably in jail or dead like so many authors who vanish.

Good luck whichever it may be.

Really wish this was continued. It’s really good.

i could have sworn I've read something really similar to this before. but longer. ah well

You should name the storyNew and abandoned"

great first chap, is this abandoned?

Baby, come back! :( Seriously, this story is amazing. I do not have the words to describe my feelings to your creation. So, please come back.

found a translation ...

"...Incompetent baboons. I bet you do not even find your own members, they are so small."

lol, rofl, lmao. in other words funny as all h3ll.

if you ever start writing this again i hope it dosn't go that dark as the old one

Why doesn't Harry learn others languages?

great story. this is probably one of if not the best fanfic i have ever read. I would pay to read this if i had to. please continue it would be such a waste to see a story as amazing as this glorious gem die such a sudden death.

It's been awhile since you updated this fic, and I really enjoyed reading the original version. I hope one day real life and your muse give you the chance to come back and continue this story. Till then...thanks for giving us what you have already written and great job!

So sad to be abandoned the plot is so good and so is ur writing I honestly thought this or your last version would challenge wand and shield for the top spot.

i like this one better more fluid but you never did explain in the original what the arab was double crossing him on.. could you please explain

Any chance you'll be continuing this? It's been quite the while since your update.

This was great.