Interesting.

I love this.

This is so beautiful, I love the concept. You made it believable as well, which is hard to do with this situation. You should really continue this!

*facepalm* You made me ship them now.

wow. i never imagined artemis and orion as a pairing but now, i think i love it!

Wow. This is beautiful... just so... great. The storyline and how it builds up to the end. Flawless. And the details, the details... I could picture the paintings, I could see it as if I was there with them. Just everything. And of course your spelling and grammar are spot on as well. This exactly the type of writing we need in this fandom. Thank you. So much. *applaudes*