Interesting idea~~ it was short but quite enjoyable, thank you for writing :))

Interesting story I enjoyed it

Cool! Please update soon!

This was great. I'm glad i took the time to read it.

Oohhhh this is so interesting and so well written too.
I like the idea of Xanxus having honour, even if only in certain cases. Very well done as usually, dear author.

I seriously love this. Between this and Darkest Fire verse, you've pretty much painted a very large, organized and logical (even more so than the canon at times) picture of what the Vongola blood/intuition is, and what the DW is and does to the body. You've even added the smaller details that most would choose to overlook, such as those about the balance of dominance and submission. It's things like that that often make or break a story, especially one that extends canon like you did in DF.

The interaction between the characters - in this case Xanxus and Tsuna - doesn't seem forced, and any growth you've added for your own personal canon fits there like natural. I honestly don't know how you do it, but I honestly hope you will continue doing it.

Oh my...wonder what will happen now in the present day

I don't really see this as pre-slash, only a twist of fluff.

But I love it even more like that

nice 3