Dear Ariyah:

Hang on a minute. How does a woman having more than human strength prove that she's from another world? All it proves is that she isn't a normal woman; further investigation is required to determine what sort of woman she is. (Unless of course Holmes already knows about Charn - but, in that case, it's only cricket of you to tell us and Watson how. Either way, the story certainly isn't over yet.)

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

Cool crossover! Ha, the second time I read 'The Magician's Nephew' I noticed that line about Sherlock Holmes and I was kinda like, "Crossover much, Lewis?" Nice story!

Beautiful.

I like this! Very good choice of crossover moment.

You wrote a good story, I like the idea that Holmes would investigate such an unusual occurrence.

Hi! I read the quote (the one in your summary) in an article today. I didn't remember reading it in the Magician's Nephew, although I read that more than once. I wondered if someone had used that quote and had written a crossover. You seem to be the only one, but yours is a good one. I do like improbable, but believable crossovers, and you handled it well, using an established event. It was nice :)

You. Are. Brilliant. This is an absolutely amazing idea, and you did an excellent job of writing it. I read this aloud to my sisters, and the result was gaping mouths followed by loud laughter. :) I loved it!

Awesomeness! I never tire of Sherlock Holmes shocking people with his genius and I love The Chronicles of Narnia. Everything felt well written and just right to me, though like others I wish it was longer. Thank you for this! :)

I think my only problem with this story is that I believe Lestrade was a plainclothes detective.
In other words - the whole story was awesome. I wonder how Holmes knew about the pearls?

I really like this! You captured Watson's narration and Holmes' dialogue quite well. I wish it were a little longer, but you wrote enough to make it a satisfying little story. Thank you for this. Great job!

Nice! I like the cross between Narnia and Sherlock Holmes. It's an interesting (and refreshing) twist to the story and I loved how you worked that in.

I love the whole idea of this crossover!
I almost chuckled with glee when I read your description.
You have captured a really AC Doyle tone to your writing too.
However I am really surprised that Sherlock accepted the supernatural so quickly. It seems VERY OOC for him to so quickly conclude a supernatural explanation. If Doyle were writing this he would have him work on the case for weeks and certainly not without interviewing Mr Ketterly and the children.
You need to withdraw the 'completed' tag and write some more chapters.
Please?!
There is so much potential for exploration here... I love it.

Very, very well written, once again! Will there be more?

JFgirl

Cool story, Ariel. *never thought of Holmes and Watson investigating that*

Well, this is interesting and well written. Certainly like nothing I've ever thought to read before, but I do like Sherlock Holmes a lot.:)