I really wanted Jaune to wander in saying "Hey guys" right before Yang shouted that. Then just freeze, eyes going wide and Jaune's brain breaks.

Here is a good one With how much shit your talking I don't know whether to give you a breath mint or a roll of toilet paper

You got this scene and chapter title from that artwork by Exvnir didn't you? Hehehe, thought so.

She's 6 ft tall while Jaunes 6"1 -_-... I think you're confusing her for ruby lol

Wtf so Cardin gets off Scot free for almost killing Jaune last chapter? Tf man

Really? Nobody is going to figure out Cardin did this? Ozpin has cameras everywhere and I know it's for the plots sake but c'mon

Hey you guys gotta check Grimm Slayer: Jaune Arc it's pretty cool it looked good as well

i'm confused, what happened with Weiss and jaune after penny came? when did jaune finally realized the attention from the other girls, did it dawn on him or did ren tell him? it just seemed to skip over important details.

I swear to Oum, if team CRDL doesn't open a restaurant by the end of the story ima lose ma s& t. XD

Knock Knock, Church

How? Pyyrah is like a foot shorter than Jaune. Kinda difficult to put her head on his shoulders like that. Seriously, girl is tiny. That or Jaune is tall.

well id read more but it looks like this fic is dead so until it updates not gona get into it

Not the best challenger considering she killed the story.

Oh well, I guess the other girls will just have to live with blue ovaries for the rest of time.

35k words in three years is pretty bad mate.

Its official this fic is dead