Reviews for One Of The Pack
Guest chapter 50 . 1/19
I really love this story, so I hope you will update again soon :)
ace-rider99 chapter 50 . 10/29/2019
hope you update soon man and I hope everything is going well for ya ive noticed you haven't updated anything in two years now so i hope all is good, but anyways I loved the story and you have inspired me to write my own if you wanna check it out.
Justinwar20 chapter 50 . 3/21/2018
Hope you update soon
imjustlikehumphery chapter 50 . 6/10/2017
Great chapter starlit, keep it up! I love Kate and Eve's reactions to hearin Lilly was pregnant. When Humphery and Cody got caught spying again the girls didn't seem to mind that much this time. Cody did get to say that even though he doesn't show it as much, he is just as excited to have pups with Lilly. It's really cool of Eve to further explain the intricacies of heat and sex in general to Serenity. Her mom helped as well. When the subject of knots came with wolfhoods it did get Serenity blushin pretty hard not to mention aroused like her mom and grandma. She even asked her mom about her fathers manhood and if it was better. Gotta say that took some guts to ask that to ur mom Serenity not that she'd get upset or anything it's just ur talkin about ur father and all. It's so cool how much Lilly and Cody love each other. Can't wait for the next chapter!
TheRavenMocker chapter 50 . 6/10/2017
Awesome chapter man and glad to see you back. Plus we have a troll on this website and it's the critics united and his alliance which is catpat. If they send you a message like "You need to remove this because MA rating is removed and you will need to avoid tos problem in the future." I told them that the admins of ffa doesn't care and me and my group were having a war with them
bikerboy chapter 50 . 6/10/2017
Wow, this was great. Also congrats on getting half way to one hundred chapters, also be careful of the CU if you know about them, but if you don't just PM and I'll explain everything. I'm not part of a group or anything but still i know about them, but other than that this was cool, also Eve... she's uh...she's a bit of kinky girl isn't she? But anyways see you in chapter 51.
Outcast320 chapter 1 . 5/12/2017
god damn i give this a 10 from beginning to end sad for my boy Winston love goes out to him i hopw there is a 2nd part to this story other than that keep up the good work and make more please
imjustlikehumphery chapter 49 . 12/27/2016
Great chapter starlit, keep it up! It's been far too long. I've missed this story alot. Anyway I'm glad that before tellin the pack, Kate and Humphery went to Eve about changin the marriage law. I'm kinda not surprised that she'd be fine with the change. After all it's an unfair law like Kate said. I'm sure others will welcome the change as well. I know Candu and Candy will be for sure. With Lilly, Cody and Serenity, it's motherly of Lilly to inform Serenity about heat and all that comes along with it. More exciting is that Lilly is pregnant again. I'm so happy for them as will everyone else not to mention Eve, Kate and Humphery. Can't wait for the next chapter!
bikerboy chapter 49 . 12/27/2016
Ya know i'm gonna be honest here, what exacty was the point of the law? And I'm not saying this for this story i'm talking about for the movie like i hope people realize that they never explained it so that's a main reason why nobody followed it, the fans nor some of the wolves in the movies and fanfic. Also i know that it's there decision but why have pups again? I'm not sure why but if they want to then it's fine. Until chapter 50.
MotherTrucker4x4 chapter 48 . 10/9/2016
Atta boy gitter done! Keep it up!
RedRaiga chapter 48 . 9/18/2016
Glad to see another chapter out Cody! I must say the ghost part freaked me out a little, though something tragic was going to happen. Also can't wait to see if Lilly gets pregnant or not. :D

See you in the next chapter my friend!
imjustlikehumphery chapter 48 . 9/12/2016
Great chapter starlit, keep it up! I'm glad that serenity warmed up to the idea of having either a bro or sis. Also I'm glad that all the girls had some time to themselves since Lilly might be pregnant soon. I feel for eve relating to the moonlight howl as well. I'm glad that Winston seems to be watching over Lilly and I'm sure everyone else that he cared about. Not surprised that his ghost scared the living crap out of her though. I'm happy for Kate and Humphrey that they will be the new head alphas and be in charge of the pack. It's a huge responsibility but one I know they'll be totally up for. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Troy Groomes chapter 48 . 9/11/2016
Lilly had a spiritual visit from her dad.
Sounds like me when I fly my grandfather's(mom's side) f4u-1c corsair. My grandfather's spirit is with me in the cockpit
Bossu chapter 48 . 9/11/2016
You're back! Really back! You're an awesome writer and your stories have been missed.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/24/2016
Please make another one of the pack book chapter 2
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