Reviews for General Grievous: Prove Your Worth
An Preson Peepul chapter 8 . 7/12/2019
First off: that was pretty brutal, not gonna lie.
Second:
Funny enough, it took me the same amount of time to finish reading this as it did for you to finish writing this (That is to say, about two years. I started in 2017, finished in 2019).
Not that this wasn't good-far from it, actually. It's just that really long chapters intimidate me (don't ask why), and it takes me forever to pick up the damn thing. Once I did pick up, though, you did a really good job at keeping me hooked in! Really made it worth the length.
Great story overall. The only issue I have is that sometimes you get certain words mixed up (idol for idle, your for you're, sweet for sweat, etc), and the fact that you seem to avoid appostrophes (enemies chest plate instead of enemy's chest plate) but that's all minor grammar stuff.
Anyway, keep up the great work!
scpsecurecontain123 chapter 1 . 12/13/2018
a fucking padwan beating general greivous what the fuck?
bop chapter 2 . 12/17/2017
this is fucking amazing
Gragaza chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
I'd like to say this is one of the best General Grievous Fanfics I have ever read, I even had the whole thing printed out (reading off a screen really hurts my eyes) so i could read it and nwo I cna read it anytime, really great job
funnybunny16 chapter 3 . 7/21/2015
Oh my god please continue. I am in love with this story.
bladestarF60blazer chapter 8 . 7/10/2015
General,This is simply one of the greatest stories I have ever the end of it I was shaking with un abashed delight.
Seriously I wish there was a new series
.Star War:Trials of the Republic
Just to show something at least half as good as this.
I would be honoured if you read my story and gave me pointers in terms of direction of plot even though it is nowhere as good as yours.
Great job man just one of best
jordan.pointer.18 chapter 8 . 3/7/2015
love this story.
The Warrior Of Twilight chapter 8 . 3/7/2015
Well, I must applaud this brilliant story you've mind. It has all the imagination, all the creativity, and I thoroughly believed this would have actually happened during the Clone Wars. You did everyone's characters justice, and I'll just jokingly point out with all these military strategies and battle tactics; you'd make a great war general. Again, fantastic story, well done!
PrussianSpaceMarine chapter 8 . 3/6/2015
Incredible! It's great to see another Grievous fan, especially one who writes such an excellent story. I've only been around for a little while, but this is one of the best fanfictions I've read on the site. Bravo, sir!
Guest chapter 7 . 11/29/2014
This was just amazing! Incredible descriptions and dialouge, the backgroundstory stays utterly faithfull to Grievous! Must say Im impressed by the amount of time and detaile that has been put in to this, Flashbacks were also beautifully preformed! I do hope you continue with this story if you find the time, even though it is a year later :D
hotpockets chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Good but why no genaral milk in this fanfic
potatoman117 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Hotpockets make me happy
Grievos27 chapter 5 . 3/1/2014
This story is Incredible! I'm really enjoying it and I look forward to your next update.
ChasCT2 chapter 4 . 1/31/2014
Great chapter, the biggest battle is going to happen next chapter correct?

I love how you are showing all the tactical details that go into war then just straight combat.
ChasCT2 chapter 3 . 12/31/2013
Great chapter, so will grievous be getting more troops or not because even with his tiny fleet and the keelesh, they're still outnumbered by the republic
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