It made me cry!

This is amazing. I love the overlap between Nathan's death and the happy moments with Audrey. Now stop reading this praise and get writing more for these 2! (please)

Wow. That was incredibly sad but beautifully written.

This is beautifully written and so, so sad.

I want to say more but I can't put it in to words. Just, well done.

I don't usually cry but I'm in tears. It's so beautifully written! Well done in every aspect from Nathan's ability to feel to Audrey's reaction to what the final moments would be like.

I'm crying all over again! Ahh...

Oh my gosh. This is so terribly sad I want to cry, but it's also absolutely beautiful so I kind of both love you and hate you. I absolutely love the way you juxtapose them in bed being happy and Nathan dying. The ending, where they talk about forever while we learn how absolutely short that forever is KILLS ME. I can't believe you killed Nathan! But the writing is so good and the feelings so vivid and how do you do fluff and angst together so perfectly? Wow. Kudos. But also ... how about some pure fluff to make this better next time.

Also, the disconnect Nathan has when he still doesn't feel anything while he's dying was really well done too.