| Reviews for Take A Breath, Make A Wish |
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   Brokenblackrose89 chapter 1 . 1/5 That ending is perfect |
| WriterGirl1198 chapter 1 . 6/8/2016 As much as I love this, they do know what day she was found. That would have been in her file, which she has seen, and she was only a few hours old. |
| crazy-wild-and-free chapter 1 . 3/29/2016 Oh my shipper heart! It's always so beautiful how they both understand each other so well and then that ending. Amazing! I adore this OS so very much! |
| Nyxia chapter 1 . 10/4/2015 Hey again ! How do you manage to write so freaking good fanfictions?! You just nailed it! It was right on their personnalities characters, the scene was so realistic; it could have been in the serie! Again, I'm jealous of your talent, your creativity, your ideas. I'm continuing my path through your awesome stories ! :) See ya around, dearie ! ~Nyxia |
| Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 9/3/2015 Aww, that was adorable. And it makes a lot of sense that there would be a birthday disconnect, doesn't it? |
| Melly326 chapter 1 . 3/11/2015 So sweet loved it |
| spicysorrelstar chapter 1 . 2/19/2015 I lovelovelove ALL of you stories but we DO know when Emma's birthday. We see the newspaper article about the abandoned baby Emma and how she was only a few hours old when August brought her to the diner. Sorry, I really do love your stories, but this kept nagging at me. Sorry. :( |
| effulgentcolors chapter 1 . 9/4/2014 Beautiful! I wasexpectantly holding my breath for that last paragraph, it made it all the more perfect! |
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki chapter 1 . 8/30/2014 The "Neal is a dragon" part had me in hysterics! |
| Invisible Observer 3 chapter 1 . 4/27/2014 That was good though now I keep trying to imagine them convincing David that Neal is a dragon. |
| WarriorPrincessNumber42 chapter 1 . 3/21/2014 Awe, so cute and romantic. I hope you don't mind but I'm being a creeper and reading most of your old Once fics. I love the way you write the show's characters and the honesty in your writing. |
| MadisonEmrys chapter 1 . 3/17/2014 Ahh absolutely loved this! Captain Swan forever! That is something I've kind of wondered about also since they celebrated Henry's birthday, so why not Emma's? Great idea and plot for this, it was great! :) MadisonEmrys |
| TashaRose chapter 1 . 2/11/2014 Excellent, and quite believable to have happen. |
| swishandflickwit chapter 1 . 1/16/2014 WAAAAAH this is so tragically beautiful. I mean, it really annoys me how in the show, Snow's always sort of pushing for things to be how they were or supposed to be as opposed to how they really are and this is a perfect example of why that is not ok for Emma. I mean I guess that's why Snow wants another baby (apart from the fact that Ginny's pregnant for realsss) but ugh, srsly, it is not ok. Once again you have managed to capture the complexity of Emma's character and the depth of her anxiety and despair over her childhood and of course, you've managed to further deepen the connection between our purate and his princess. Spectacular job as always! |
| Jaycie Victory chapter 1 . 12/27/2013 Achingly sweet. |
