okay wow i love this x

This story is so interesting! I love that you went through the intricacies of the peace talks, it's so cool to see stuff like that included. I would love to know where this story is going! It's super well written and fun!

This story is so neat! It’s so well written and intriguing. I know you haven’t updated in years, but I would love to see where this story goes!

God dammit this is beautiful!

I hope you update again one day even if it's been two years

Dammit I need this continued!
Arrrrgh so close to an actual conversation between Miri and Jim!

I know life goes on and you probably have many thing on your plate more important than this story but if you could find your muse and continue writing I, for one, would be grateful.

Awesome story! Can't wait for more!

love this concept and particularly this chapter great job!

Wow, what a well written chapter, you were able to convey all the tensions admirably. It felt like we were right there with Miri. Well done, and thank you for the great read! I can't wait to read more.

Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!

I like where this is going... :)

Fantastic! I'm so pleased you carried on with this story. I'd given up hope that you were going to add to it. I can't wait to hear what happens next.

Awesome job with this please continue.

~Dragondancer

It's a great story, really well written. I hope you choose to continue it.

love this story, can't wait to read more!