| Reviews for Lives Become Entwined |
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   celajwhitney chapter 32 . 5/29 and Edward wasn't even there at the end to screw everything up! great ending, thank you. |
| Roxhall1 chapter 18 . 12/19/2019 Bella told Eddie to drop dead! love this girl, she just made Jasper's day... |
| Kemq chapter 32 . 6/23/2019 Good story. |
| celajwhitney chapter 22 . 1/13/2019 edward is still thinking the world revolved around him and that he is entitled to their thoughts. he really is a mind raper, taking what isn't his. |
| celajwhitney chapter 16 . 1/13/2019 bella told edward to drop dead ( ha ha ), so he has day call bella? what a twerp! will carlisle ever get tired of edward's whining when he doesn't get what he wants? why do the cullens not ask bella what she wants and actually listen for a change? |
| celajwhitney chapter 7 . 1/12/2019 edward is such a prat! |
| celajwhitney chapter 6 . 1/12/2019 i don't know who is more immature, jake edward or carlisle. just because bella is engaged to edward doesn't mean she has no say in the relationship. |
| kelmikmag chapter 32 . 10/3/2018 Love your stories! |
| andrewpine chapter 3 . 6/21/2018 There should not have been any trouble with the nomads after the ballgame was not Jasper the God of War the baddest vampire ever? he could have taken out all three of them without any trouble if Carlisle and his bottom were not such cowards and decided to run away instead. |
| andrewpine chapter 27 . 6/2/2018 I wonder how long Aro will live once Bella gets to Volterra? |
| andrewpine chapter 22 . 6/2/2018 What can I say,Little Eddie is an arrogant ,self important Bella is for sure daddy would tell his little boy what they were doing. |
| andrewpine chapter 20 . 6/2/2018 Jasper stop being a gentleman and turn your mate,so she can protect you and her from the greedy prick Aro. |
| andrewpine chapter 9 . 6/1/2018 Still never understood why he didn't use bagged blood that way he didn't have to deal with the emotions and got the control he needed. he should have taken Eddie's head with him,arrogant prick |
| andrewpine chapter 8 . 6/1/2018 If it were Eddie he would not have tapped he would have just came is she going to do about,the Volturi she is still under death watch? |
| andrewpine chapter 7 . 6/1/2018 Hopefully Jasper will be able to keep her safe from Eddie and his mate Carlisle. |
