I actually thought this story was rather fun to read as well as shocking from the slight love making xD all in all, I loved it :3

cool

if this is you when your rusty then you're a really awesome writer :3 normally one shots have these super rushed plots but this is awesome!

Wow reallu cool! Publish the other story! I want to hear who Malcolm is."! Is he from Vaughns marrage witg Sabrina? Ooo so amny questions!