I kinda hope she's a crazy yandere tbh

She sounds super cute!

Whaaaaaaaat LIly?! That’s a nice little twist. I can’t wait to read the next chapter!

So far, a really great read. I like that the romance started early and story aligns with them struggling together. I would love to see more

Get the hell out of there! It's bad news all the way!

what sane person would enjoy something like this anyway. such disrespect for the dead. :P

Merle really is a very unique character. who would have thought that Alice could tame the Dixon Brothers. :D

HA! that'll shut Merle for a while. that was so classic of Alice! :D

i hope they escape. some bad juju going on in the place.

I am really enjoying your story!

I like that you have an original plot line but have intertwined some of the characters and storyline from the original.

I think you capture the characters very well. Their thoughts, reactions to the troubles of the Apocalypse, even their reactions to each other are very realistic in my eyes.

You discribe things just the right amount too. Not going into so much detail that I'm bored because nobody wants to know what a lamp looks like in that much detail but not so little detail that I'm grasping at straws trying to picture everything in my head. I thinks its the perfect amount to suck me into the story with no problem and keep me intrigued.

I'm glad she's following her gut! That's always the best way to go! I'm wondering what's wrong with Daryl though I do have some ideas. What will they do next?

Daryl saw something bad. everyone knows that Daryl has a very strong moral compass.

Merle doesn't realize he's the weaker brother. i hope Alice sees to it that Daryl knows. :)

trust your guts Alice! :O

Love it!
I read it all in one go, around 3hs hahaha, great writing, great character development.
Thanks for the original and captivating story, hope to read more soon :)

i am just imagining Daryl walking the runway and striking a pose. ;)