ZORO GOT LOST FOR 3 YEARS LMFAO

I have been in bit of a LawLu phase and this is my favorite fanfic of them so far! Wonderful job!

my names belle hue hue hue

very interesting story...
keep it up!

* shock * huh!
OMFG!
Ace is going to kill Law!
oh shit!

so far so good...I like the story so fucking much!

wAAAHHH this is so MOREMORE LAWLUplz

I liked it overall really cute...but after Luffy gets kid and killer together you don't mention Luffy as an informant anymore. That was like disappointing in a way because thats just how you introduced him as. And suddenly there was nothing else on him being an informant.
I really love this story. This is my 2nd time reading it. Haha
I love how you decided on making nori a cross dresser. But I honestly feel like law would have been more supportive about it. A little shocked yes but he would have gotten over it and just gone along with it. since you decided to make him a cross dresser I would have hoped you would have added Bon-chan into the story. Like he could have an influential person so he would know that he isn't the only person like that.
Great work.

Law and Luffy's scenes are so sweet x3 A bit sorry for Luffy when Nori just staring at him :( Though it was a bit funny :D I think transvestite Nori is very cute :3 It was nice of him to let him unfold :) The lemons are so fantastic! Really (*q*) Luffy relaxed tell law that he wants to come out xD After he roars one xDD But when Nori calls Luffy Daddy is so nice and aw e.e Ade so funny too xD Pistachio ice cream with Bolognese sauce AND mashed potatoe would be very delicious! Nyami xD I was surprised when Luffy got pregnant for the third time, with twins :D (I have a few friend and they're triplets o.o) I really like when Law says to Nori that he is gorgeous, its so nice :) But after :D "Could you please stop buying him dresses?" he pleaded Luffy who started laughing." Well, I laughed BIG x'D I'm a little sad for the girls :( But they are heppy :')
(Sorry for late review e_e But I had to write a chemistry essay and it was hard, very hard T_T )

Wow, it was updated...and wow their children sounds so sweet...i love nori and his dress thing he has going on ahaha!, and lu cant pronounce his own last name now? Ahaha

Wow, lots of kids you got there... well not you, but you made them have lots of kids... :D
... and I sooooo died at Nori and his liking for dresses... hilarious... :D
Though it's sad that Miza and Kika have those problems... so sad!... ;{
But I will be brave and live with it! :D
Now, scolding time! (not really) so I found several mistakes and I will be mean and point them out (I'm sorry for being mean, forgive me?) so before 3 year time skip in Luffy's last sentence he said 'knew house' (how does he know that house? :D) and in Law's last sentence he said 'than' than is used when you prefer one thing instead of another, so it's 'then' that should have been there... ;}
And the another is after the eight month time skip, which followed three year time skip... I'm not sure who said it, but instead of 'this way' you wrote 'this why'...
I know I'm a b**ch for doing that, but I want to tell you that this is still great! :} (blows a kiss)

Please update, I cant wait any longer

Waaaah!this is the most Touchin story i have ever readdddd!
This is so perrffff/
My kokoro cant handle this/crais
So next chapter is last chappy? Waaah noooo oAo
Please do a 10 year later sequelXDDDDDD
And yoosssh!Ace and Law are aliveeeeee!XD

Waaaah!Next chapter is the last chappy? Awww i thought you would make another chapter like 10 years later XDD well I really love this storyyyyyyyy ouo
It touches my kokoro so muchhh/
Waaaaaah!I really love this storyyXD
I still can't say goodbye to it ! OAO)
Well byeXDDD

wow im a bit upset i found this story so late but i feel like crying for law and luffy and you even kept the heights realistic to the one piece universe

I've caught up! *celebrates* (too bad I started out reading late 8')) Anyways, review

First off, I want to say you've improved your writing during those ten chapters x3!

Now the story itself.. To be honest I barely read M-Pregs bwahahaha x'D But your fic is okay :3! And Luffy's background is really interesting!

Omg I'm sorry if I suck in reviewing bwahaha x'D