I loved this story but my favorite was simoneatte

this last chapter is a gem. this whole story is just awesome

not bad this was a very much a Janette chapter very awesome

I so love this chapter it is perdect

Kyaaaaa! That Alvitanny story was just so perfect! I love it, I love it, I love ittt! Oh my gosh. I was squealing with delight when I found out Alvin left her a rose (and a love poem). THAT WAS SOOO CUTE. And sooo uncalled for, I didn't expect that which made it much more surprising and wonderful when I found out he did do that. Hahahaha. HOMECOMING. AWWWW.

YAY. Alvittany for the win! ️️️

BTW. I am currently stalking you. I am loving your stories! You are so AWESOME, WITH A CAPITAL "A" for Alvin. If that even made sense. Hahahaha X)

How could I say this..? This. Is. Amazing. I never expected that Alvin would write that kind of poem for Brittany. Really, If I were the producer, I would create a movie and use your idea, especially 'Unafraid To Tear Your Heart'..

That wasn't too sappy- it was cute and funny.

I actually wasn't expecting Brittany to scream "I'M GONNA KILL YOU!" So I kinda jumped in my seat so to speak xD
Haha loved Brittany's 'stalker theory' XD
And how awkward they were about holding hands... and when she almost fell off of the bike...
Okay all of these were listed out of order but whatever this was cute!

I loved this! It was so in-character for everyone and so cute and soooo long (I like long stories too lol)
I kind of loved every single part of this so I'm not going to point out specific quotes or anything.

(On a side-note I forgot that "thrice" was a word... Thank you Simon for making me feel like a complete idiot.)

ASDFGHJKL Tge way alvin asked her to homecoming was totally perfect! Ugh, I wish you could just write a whole story about that! Anyway, this story was perfect and you're awesome.

This one was fantastic i loved it great work and how everything played out was superb great job

I changed my mind. Alvittany is better! I loved this one-shot. It was so much like Alvin and Brittany. You did a good job with this series. I loved reading them. All of them were really my favorite, to be honest. :) I loved how you made everyone in character, Simon, Jeanette, Theodore, Eleanor, Alvin, Brittany. All in character. You are a great writer.

You should be getting more reviews, these one- shots are very well written and are good! I hope to be reading something new from you soon.

awesome

God, you deserve way more reviews than you get. Especially since you obviously work so hard on these.

This was absolutely perfect. I love Alvittany to death, and barely anyone actually gets their relationship right. But you did, and I love you for that! I love how Alvin asked Brittany out to homecoming, it was adorable while still being in character.

All three of these were great. You're an amazing writer!

Poor Jeanette. Imagine bumping into your "almost" crush, losing your umbrella and then ruining her library books by accidentally dropping them in a puddle all in an hour or less. She's lucky she had Simon there to help her out.

Brittany was being so selfish in this chapter. Jeanette has had a horrible day, and all she can think about is missing a party. I suppose that's her, but you'd think she'd be a little sympathetic

It's good that Simon's always there to help Jeanette. If is really sweet.

It was amazing it really brought out the the sides w never see in them great work